Line Gauthier Poet Free verse

Twinkle Toes

one that got away
two too late to deviate
three cute twinkle toes 

wiggle them till those little toes are free
count with me one and two and three



AP: Honorable Mention 2022

Submitted on February 25, 2019 for contest CHARLIEKUCOUP sponsored by CHARLES MESSINA  -  RANKED 3RD

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Eve Roper March 7, 2019 at 1:37 PM Congratulations on a great Haiku & Couplet, Line, :) cute. ... Hugs Eve ~`* Line Gauthier March 7, 2019 at 4:38 PM Thank you so much, Eve.

Anne-Lise Andresen March 7, 2019 at 4:38 AM - Congratulations on your win :) - Line Gauthier March 7, 2019 at 9:11 AM Thank you so much, Sunshine.

Andrea Dietrich March 6, 2019 at 3:09 PM nicely whimsical, Line. Congrats. Line Gauthier March 6, 2019 at 3:19 PM Thanks, Andrea. Much appreciated.

Charles Messina March 6, 2019 at 1:54 PM This one made me laugh. Well done, Line. Congratulations on your win...Charlie :) Line Gauthier March 6, 2019 at 3:01 PM Thank you so much, Charles. Much appreciated.

Paul Callus February 26, 2019 at 7:50 AM Twinkle toeing...So cute and enjoyable, Line! gl in the contest:) Regards // paul Line Gauthier February 26, 2019 at 10:11 AM LOL I don't usually write for kids.Thanks for your visit and words of encouragement, Paul.

Caren Krutsinger February 26, 2019 at 5:51 AM This one is so much fun to read! I could sing this, but people would beg me to please stop. Line Gauthier February 26, 2019 at 10:12 AM Thanks, Caren. Glad you like it.

Michelle Faulkner February 25, 2019 at 11:47 PM Such juicy little pink toes, I want to eat them up! Line Gauthier February 26, 2019 at 10:12 AM Glad this one tickles your appetite, Michelle. LOL

M. L. Kiser February 25, 2019 at 9:42 AM A very adorable Charliekucoup...I'm wiggling my toes now. Line Gauthier February 25, 2019 at 2:16 PM Thanks, ML. Must be an after-effect of the child tale contest.