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November Twinkle fairy was feeling very low, to the Giggle Night Ball she had wanted to go But her gold fairy wings were all tattered and torn - she’d landed in a thicket, they’d caught on a thorn And she got into a tizzy to escape from the bush, when she cried out for help fairies came in a rush Twinkle was so upset, she’d had her wings for years no amount of tissues could stem her flow of tears Her mother said Twinkle ‘please listen to me, you’ll grow some new wings, just wait patiently’ ‘Use this special lotion and rub in some fairy dust, for the magic to work, you must stand still - you must! Twinkle looked in the mirror, her back was quite bare - her old wings had vanished, she was all too aware All of a sudden her back got a terrible itch, as her body contorted she began to twitch Magic dust filled the air, new wings started to sprout, it took nine nano seconds for her wings to spread out Twinkle stood motionless until her new wings had dried, they glistened like dew drops, she beamed with such pride With her dazzling new wings she was the belle of the ball and she spread rainbow dust as she flew round the hall November Twinkle Fairy Contest Sponsored By Caren Krutsinger 10/30/19

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Date: 11/19/2019 11:11:00 PM
Congrats on your win Jan
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Date: 11/12/2019 10:31:00 AM
Oh I adore this poem! A fave for me! Good luck in the contest! :)
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 11/12/2019 10:57:00 AM
aww thanks Chantelle I hope Caren likes it oo:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 10/31/2019 6:01:00 PM
Nicely done, Jan. Nice story for children around the world. Aloha! Rico
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Date: 10/31/2019 6:39:00 PM
thanks Rico I love to write poems suitable for children (of all ages lol) hugs jan xx
Date: 10/31/2019 3:30:00 PM
Beautiful poem, Jan, a winner for sure. Hugs eve
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 10/31/2019 6:38:00 PM
a win is never guaranteed lol i got na for a poem yet got POTD for it today lol:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 10/31/2019 3:27:00 PM
Enjoyed and seemed fit for a poetry reading especially for young children. Enjoyed as an adult as well.
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Date: 10/31/2019 6:38:00 PM
thanks Linda:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 10/31/2019 2:32:00 PM
Now this is worthy of a children's book. Loved this. Great stuff. God Bless, JB
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Date: 10/31/2019 5:42:00 PM
thanks Judy I enjoyed writing for the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 10/31/2019 1:38:00 PM
- A wonderful and sweet poem with sparkling magic dust, Jan :) - I hope you take the top win in the contest ... good luck :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/31/2019 5:42:00 PM
thanks Anne-Lise:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 10/31/2019 9:51:00 AM
This gave me twinkle cheer, excellent JAN
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Date: 10/31/2019 1:00:00 PM
Thanks Bobby my PS bro:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 10/31/2019 7:12:00 AM
OH! What a sweet, magical piece, Jan. Loved it from start to finish! Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 10/31/2019 1:00:00 PM
Thanks Eileen I do enjoy writing poems suitable for children:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 10/31/2019 6:22:00 AM
So beautiful, Jan!
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Date: 10/31/2019 12:59:00 PM
Thanks Kim:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 10/31/2019 6:00:00 AM
Wonderful poem, Dear Jan... Love it. Sure it's a winner. Bless you, Gina
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Date: 10/31/2019 12:59:00 PM
thanks Gina:-) hugs Jan x
Date: 10/31/2019 12:57:00 AM
That was a fairy tale of love. Best for a win. Hugs. xx
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Date: 10/31/2019 3:37:00 AM
thanks Victor it was fun to write I hope Caren likes it:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 10/30/2019 6:31:00 PM
Fine write Jan, good penning with nice imagery too. Trust all good with hubby these days, Blessings always,Gordon
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Date: 10/30/2019 6:34:00 PM
Thanks Gordon, yes all good with hubby... mum took a tumble recently - got broken ribs but she was so lucky it wasn't more serious:-) hope all good with you:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 10/30/2019 3:31:00 PM
Such a fun and enchanting piece of writing Jan. This is my favorite so far. Best wishes in the contest
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Date: 10/30/2019 4:32:00 PM
thanks so much for the comment Chris I enjoy writing poems for children and had such fun writing for the contest :-) hugs Jan xx