twin trouble- dodo

Nice to see the winners' list with your name on it and also, see what everyone else wrote for the contest. Congratulations. Way to go. Sara K

- Congratulations on your win in the contest, Ink :) - hugs

Back with congratulations, dear Inky! What you see is often not what you get - with identical twins! This really does bring a smile to my face! Thanks for the smile! Samzy!

How embarassing that would be for a suitor. Two things, my Mom (passed away) and Dad are both identical twins. Also, once my sis borrowed a wig during a party and my husband was about to kiss her…lol. Oh my my my! Great and now with narrative! Congrats, IE!

This is so interesting. I love to see identical twins. In my class in the college, there was a pair of identical twins, so hard to distinguish. They used to play tricks on my inability to identify them. If I entrust something to one and if he fails, I will be scolding the other. Sometimes they fool me telling, "you didn't tell me, must have been the other"! I often was left confused. Your poem has brought a smile to my face. Is your twin sister too as talented as you? How happy your growing up together must have been!

IE, funny story you tell. Didn't know you have an identical twin. That must be fun. Hope you are both well. Twins make for a very interesting study of nature vs nurture.

It's ready! Get going!! And good night

Awwn, lol an amazing dodoitsu poem, with a twist of course! You and your sister are the most kind and beautiful twins, I can tell.. And with the storyline here, he definitely shouldn't have trusted his sight.. You write such witty writes, still with so much elegance and with a humor that still shimmers with poetic depth! Heart and soul are always the prominent rulers in 'love'.. beyond everything.. An enjoyable read ~ keep writing, sending many best wishes.

Lol Inky. Didn't know you were a twin. He definitely should have trusted his heart. I always say it's not the body or physical, it's the soul. Cheers.

- Being identical twins will have many challenges, I think ... but mostly fun :) - hugs

Hi Inky! This is so full of whimsical delight and a bit of "twins" mischief. You expressed the situation so perfectly in your short lines. The picture is clear as sunlight through your well chosen words and images! My two best friends in college were both twins - not identical - but twins none the less. I thoroughly enjoyed your tale of misdirection and mischievous mistaken identity! Well done! Reminds me of Shakespeare's comedies. Blessings to you dear friend! Samzy.

Dear Empress, your story of mistaken identity and playful deception was very interesting. Growing up as twins must have been a whirlwind of shared experiences and mischievous moments. Your dodoitsu captures the humor and complexity of human relationships that sometimes love and attraction can lead us down unexpected paths. What a lighthearted yet thought-provoking tale. I enjoyed every single word. -Blessings, Daniel.

Shows, many are more outwardly visual than interior. Yourself and your sister must of had great fun growing up. A meditation in a way. Blessings.

twins can be different, never judge them, in my eyes, thanks for the dleicate poem, enjoyed

Twins are always welcome. One wonders who is who.

So sad that people can be just classified to someone as an object, it's the same as just blind lust in my opinion...good luck in the contest

Lol. This was good and typical of stories I've heard from other twins.

I used to have twin cousins, they loved to play tricks on others too, lol, cute one

Love it, Ink. Soupmail.

Must be fun having a twin.. I always thought it would be interesting to have a twin as a gemini... I used to date a twin, but I could tell the difference between the two as one was always happy and smiling and the other one was grumpy and angry.... two opposites. but they did have this very powerful spiritual connection.. Best of luck in the contest dear..

Oh my, that sounds embarrassing. Having a twin sister does seem like a good opportunity to craft mischief.

The experience was probably a bit unbearable, yet also quite entertaining. Impressively crafted, with a truly exquisite feeling. Oh wow, it was your identical twin! He hugged me tightly, and we shared a rather awkward anecdote about our deepest longings...

Very interesting read!

held her heart, thinking of stars. That’s gorgeous feeling aee., Ayayaaaaa… it was my twin, he embrace… awkward tale of lust.. my my awkward indeed… hahahah

Hahah this happens to twins all the time . Good one