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Twin Flames

Twin Flames  

one  flame  flickers   blue 		
as love  awakes a journey  		
connecting a friend			
as red flame sparks holding hands   	
tame  harmony	 remains   “Love”		

te amo

holding each other  			
our own little universe 			
communicating 			
in a  language all our own		
burning  one unified flame	
	
jet ’aime

flickering flame sings				
orange  green  red   blue	one soul
passionate love grows 
candle ignites luminous 
holding my heart existence

I love you




3/4/2016
I love you in  Spanish, te amo and France, Jet ’aime 

Poetry Contest :Twin Flames  

 Sponsored by: Nayda Ivette Negron

Copyright © Eve Roper | Year Posted 2016

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Quoth Theraven Date: 3/28/2021 12:30:00 PM Eve, Fine flames in a Tanka of wonder. So many ways to say I love you. -Richard Login to Reply

Skat A Date: 3/19/2016 12:58:00 AM Eve, Congratulations on your win. **SKAT** Login to Reply

Vladislav Raven Date: 3/15/2016 7:39:00 PM Hi Eve, dropping by once more with my congratulations on your win in the contest and i am giving your poem another seven....Vlad. Login to Reply

Sandra Haight Date: 3/14/2016 10:03:00 PM Very lovely and creative Eve. Congratulations on your fine win. Hugs, Sandra Login to Reply

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores Date: 3/13/2016 2:56:00 PM Congratulations on the placement of the contest Eve Login to Reply

Beautiful Scars Date: 3/13/2016 12:38:00 PM The third stanza is very powerful Eve, congrats on your placement in the contest :)-luloo Login to Reply

Bl Devnath Date: 3/6/2016 6:17:00 AM Beautiful poem my lovely friend beautifully expressed. Good luck in the contest. Loved always, bl Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 3/5/2016 8:10:00 PM I love how you did yours. So creative. Login to Reply

Vladislav Raven Date: 3/5/2016 10:39:00 AM Hi Eve, well i am glad i stepped by this contest entry. This is an excellent piece of romantic poetry. Love has to sing and you have done so with this write. Your twin flames do burn bright, they sing into the heart. Good luck in the contest Eve. A seven from me and it goes into my faves....Vlad Login to Reply

Susan Palli Date: 3/5/2016 7:26:00 AM Beautiful! All the best in the contest. Login to Reply

Lin Lane Date: 3/5/2016 2:16:00 AM Very romantic, Eve. Love between two is its own little universe. Login to Reply

Jan Allison Date: 3/4/2016 11:26:00 PM Oh Eve so romantic - I agree with Eileen and love the way you used the different languages of love:-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply

Eileen Manassian Date: 3/4/2016 11:02:00 PM Lovely, my dear...."Communicating in a language all our own...burning one united flame." Beautiful lines. I like who you incorporated the different languages. Great write. Login to Reply