Eve Roper Poet Tanka

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Twin Flames

Twin Flames  

one  flame  flickers   blue 		
as love  awakes a journey  		
connecting a friend			
as red flame sparks holding hands   	
tame  harmony	 remains   “Love”		

te amo

holding each other  			
our own little universe 			
communicating 			
in a  language all our own		
burning  one unified flame	
	
jet ’aime

flickering flame sings				
orange  green  red   blue	one soul
passionate love grows 
candle ignites luminous 
holding my heart existence

I love you




3/4/2016
I love you in  Spanish, te amo and France, Jet ’aime 

Poetry Contest :Twin Flames  

 Sponsored by: Nayda Ivette Negron

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Quoth Theraven March 28, 2021 at 12:30 PM Eve, Fine flames in a Tanka of wonder. So many ways to say I love you. -Richard

Skat A March 19, 2016 at 12:58 AM Eve, Congratulations on your win. **SKAT**

Vladislav Raven March 15, 2016 at 7:39 PM Hi Eve, dropping by once more with my congratulations on your win in the contest and i am giving your poem another seven....Vlad.

Sandra Haight March 14, 2016 at 10:03 PM Very lovely and creative Eve. Congratulations on your fine win. Hugs, Sandra

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores March 13, 2016 at 2:56 PM Congratulations on the placement of the contest Eve

Beautiful Scars March 13, 2016 at 12:38 PM The third stanza is very powerful Eve, congrats on your placement in the contest :)-luloo

Bl Devnath March 6, 2016 at 6:17 AM Beautiful poem my lovely friend beautifully expressed. Good luck in the contest. Loved always, bl

Andrea Dietrich March 5, 2016 at 8:10 PM I love how you did yours. So creative.

Vladislav Raven March 5, 2016 at 10:39 AM Hi Eve, well i am glad i stepped by this contest entry. This is an excellent piece of romantic poetry. Love has to sing and you have done so with this write. Your twin flames do burn bright, they sing into the heart. Good luck in the contest Eve. A seven from me and it goes into my faves....Vlad

Susan Palli March 5, 2016 at 7:26 AM Beautiful! All the best in the contest.

Lin Lane March 5, 2016 at 2:16 AM Very romantic, Eve. Love between two is its own little universe.

Jan Allison March 4, 2016 at 11:26 PM Oh Eve so romantic - I agree with Eileen and love the way you used the different languages of love:-) hugs Jan xx

Eileen Manassian March 4, 2016 at 11:02 PM Lovely, my dear...."Communicating in a language all our own...burning one united flame." Beautiful lines. I like who you incorporated the different languages. Great write.