Twilight Pink

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moon sheer twilight pink glistening fireflies twinkle in somber darkness August 21, 2021 A Brian Strand 2 to 5 lines Poetry contest FIRST PLACE

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Anitha Jayasankar

Date: 8/28/2021 8:11:00 AM

Beautiful Haiku with a lovely image dear Mala... Hugs... ~ Ani

Christuraj Alex

Date: 8/23/2021 11:25:00 PM

Great Haiku. I do not know how I missed reading it earlier. Congratulations on your win!

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 8/24/2021 10:55:00 AM

Thank you, Dear Friend. I am going to read yours soon. BW~ Mala

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/23/2021 3:50:00 PM

very lovely, and now I can get off. I am finished here for the day!!

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 8/23/2021 4:35:00 PM

Yes, Dear, now you can get off. Thank you for visiting my page, Andrea. Your comments are appreciated. Love ~ Mala

Jennifer Fenn

Date: 8/22/2021 5:51:00 PM

As a Californian, I've never seen fireflies up close, and have always wanted to, and this beautiful poem reminded me that someday, that is possible. Thank you, Mala!

Eve Roper

Date: 8/21/2021 11:31:00 PM

beautiful pink moon, and great haiku, Malabika.

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 8/21/2021 4:49:00 PM

Lovely. God bless you always, Love, Gina

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 8/21/2021 4:58:00 PM

Thanks, Gina, for visiting my page. Love and blessings ~ Mala