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Twilight Notions

I reap the fertile ground of four am When thoughts awaken me in twilight sleep When dreams provide the seeds for me to sow And words like vines of fruit, begin to creep I seek the fertile ground of 4 am When inspiration yields a harvest pure When moonlight shines on grains of notions fair And sleepy heads find callings to explore

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Silent One

Date: 8/26/2018 11:49:00 AM

Nice meter Mike... I do not seek nothing at 4am but sleep though... lol..

Mike Gentile
Date: 8/26/2018 12:08:00 PM

Thanks Silent One, I like sleep too yet I still seem to awaken, lately my twilight muse has not been around though!

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/23/2018 3:23:00 PM

I completely identify with your words so inspired in the wee hours of morning Mike. Most of my poetry is written either late or very early before dawn. Lovely! : )

Mike Gentile
Date: 8/23/2018 4:37:00 PM

Thanks so much Connie xxoo

Heidi Sands

Date: 8/21/2018 3:38:00 PM

This is great Mike! Well done :)

Mike Gentile
Date: 8/21/2018 3:58:00 PM

Thanks Heidi xxoo

Vijay Pandit

Date: 8/21/2018 12:50:00 PM

This is pure harvest..well written at 4 am, Mike..enjoyed reading your poem.

Mike Gentile
Date: 8/21/2018 2:26:00 PM

thank you Vijay!!