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Twilight Desires

~*~ fireflies illumine shimmering twilight desires soft lips in moonlight 9/4/19 Written for the: One Haiku Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Rick Parise

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Susan Jeavons

Date: 9/24/2019 2:21:00 PM

Romantic little Haiku! Blessings Chris. Susan

Chris Green
Date: 9/24/2019 2:35:00 PM

Thank you so much Susan

Jeanne Mcgee

Date: 9/10/2019 9:02:00 AM

Nice! a romantic poet you are.

Chris Green
Date: 9/10/2019 9:12:00 AM

Thank you so much Jeanne

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 9/5/2019 9:01:00 AM

You brought me to my other happy place. I think I will go for a moonlit walk on the beach with my sweetie.

Chris Green
Date: 9/5/2019 9:15:00 AM

Wow, seems I'm really being helpful today. : ) I appreciate your kind words my friend. Have fun on your stroll.

Elizabeth Kinch

Date: 9/5/2019 4:51:00 AM

Stunning.

Chris Green
Date: 9/5/2019 7:02:00 AM

Thank you Elizabeth. I am thrilled you liked this one.

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 9/4/2019 11:11:00 PM

a caress has just been received. thank you dear Chris.

Chris Green
Date: 9/5/2019 7:01:00 AM

Thank you so much my friend. I am happy you could feel this

Eve Roper

Date: 9/4/2019 9:40:00 PM

Beautiful, Chirs, the imagery and feel is stunning. Hugs

Chris Green
Date: 9/5/2019 7:01:00 AM

Thank you so very much Eve.

Hello There

Date: 9/4/2019 7:21:00 PM

Love this sensual piece! I have written something similar but not a haiku. Maybe I'll post. This is lovely!

Hello There
Date: 9/5/2019 10:51:00 AM

Lol. Ugh... I've decided it's not ready. But, yours is a fave!

Chris Green
Date: 9/5/2019 7:01:00 AM

Oh please do, I would love to read it. Thank you for your wonderful comments always

Gershon Wolf

Date: 9/4/2019 6:56:00 PM

Yes! Perfectly pictured. Great contest entry. :) gw

Chris Green
Date: 9/5/2019 7:00:00 AM

Thanks so much Gershon

Jan Allison

Date: 9/4/2019 6:10:00 PM

oh so romantic Chris:-) hugs jan xx

Chris Green
Date: 9/5/2019 7:00:00 AM

Thank you Jan

Heidi Sands

Date: 9/4/2019 6:08:00 PM

A beautiful haiku! This will shine in the contest :)

Chris Green
Date: 9/5/2019 7:00:00 AM

Thanks so much Heidi

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/4/2019 5:26:00 PM

very romantic one!!

Chris Green
Date: 9/5/2019 7:00:00 AM

Thank you Andrea