Twilight Descends

Twilight descends on the surrounding hills ! I hear a lonely bird trill! The most soulful melody I ever heard! Her doting mate is not yet with her, Is she going to croon all night long, And fade away in the vermilion horizon! For "Bite-size - No. 33" Poetry Contest Sponsor: Line Gauthier Edited on 17/1/22 from my poem "Promise"

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Valsa George

Date: 1/20/2022 8:20:00 PM

You have rendered a beautiful scene Malabika...! So lovely... I have heard some birds crooning all night ! May be they are calling their mate !

Constance La France

Date: 1/20/2022 7:06:00 PM

Mala, your poem is lovely ~

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 1/20/2022 7:43:00 PM

Thanks, Constance. Appreciate your comments.