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Twilight Composers - Repost

~ Here on the night before yesterday’s dream, twilight composers retreat Laughing at whispers a’ flow on the stream, happily taking a seat Practicing meadowlark lyrics to sing, strumming a toadstool in tune Awaiting the light that the fireflies bring, blinking a wink at the moon Tulips with tambourines gather around, spider web chandeliers glow Shade tree sonatas, a wonderful sound, echoing up from below Pine cone recitals and blueberry sighs, star dust ovations in rhyme Choruses sung beneath velveteen skies, harmonic three quarter time Orchestral canopies glisten above, melodic rainbows the view Performing songs written solely of love, played on this evening for you ~ I reposted this one because.....I really liked this one. : )

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Line Gauthier

Date: 10/8/2019 7:22:00 AM

Lovely, Chris. Congrats on your POTD.

Chris Green
Date: 10/9/2019 8:54:00 AM

Thank you so much my friend.

W.A. Cholt

Date: 9/30/2019 12:12:00 PM

Congratulations on POTD. Beautiful, precise, melodic rhyming. This poem is alive with rich and powerful imagery.

Chris Green
Date: 9/30/2019 12:27:00 PM

Thanks so very much. I am glad you liked it

Sandra L. Weiss

Date: 9/30/2019 10:57:00 AM

Absolutely beautiful! Natures orchestra filling the evening air with such melody. Congratulations on this being chosen as POTD!

Chris Green
Date: 9/30/2019 12:27:00 PM

Thank you so very much Sandra. I appreciate your kindness

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 9/23/2019 2:34:00 PM

Harmonic music of nature rings from this gorgeous POTD poem Chris! Congratulations on your deserving honor! xxoo

Chris Green
Date: 9/23/2019 2:43:00 PM

Thank you Connie. I am thrilled you enjoyed this evening musical interlude. : )

Alexis Y.

Date: 9/23/2019 2:15:00 AM

Wow! Chris, You painted such a beautiful picture with words. I would love to be smack dab in the middle to see Nature's orchestra playing such a melody. Congratulations on getting the poem of the day. You deserved it! :-) Alexis

Chris Green
Date: 9/23/2019 9:47:00 AM

Thanks so much my friend.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 9/22/2019 5:29:00 PM

Wow! So beautiful, Chris! You have outdone yourself with tulips with tambourines, spiderweb chandeliers, shade tree sonatas and blueberry sighs! Congratulations!!

Chris Green
Date: 9/23/2019 9:47:00 AM

Thank you Kim so very much

Hello There

Date: 9/21/2019 11:12:00 PM

Hey there ~ Congratulations on this beauty!! Loved this one...

Chris Green
Date: 9/23/2019 9:47:00 AM

Hello there :) Thanks so much my friend

Susan Ashley

Date: 9/21/2019 8:31:00 PM

Chris, your luscious imagery and lilting rhythm kindles and enchants my heart and imagination. A gorgeous poem. Congratulations on your wonderful and well deserved recognition with POTD honors. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan

Chris Green
Date: 9/23/2019 9:47:00 AM

Thank you so much Susan

Lonna Blodgett

Date: 9/21/2019 8:07:00 PM

What a wonderful poem. You are a troubadour in your muse. Lonna

Chris Green
Date: 9/23/2019 9:46:00 AM

Thanks so much Lonna

Jeanne Mcgee

Date: 9/21/2019 8:03:00 PM

This is a fav with your wonderful images sung in three quarter time. Well done Chris, I love it....congrats on potd.

Chris Green
Date: 9/23/2019 9:46:00 AM

Thank you Jeanne

Brandy Nicole

Date: 9/21/2019 4:55:00 PM

I really like this one too. :) Thank you for re-posting. I don't think I read it the first time. This last thought makes my heart smile. "played on this evening for you" So sweet, beautiful and romantic. You have such a wonderful heart. The images you paint, take me there. I am lingering in the melody. Congratulations Chris, on Poem of the Day. :) Brandy

Chris Green
Date: 9/23/2019 9:46:00 AM

Thank you so very much Brandy

Sandra Adams

Date: 9/21/2019 2:41:00 PM

back to say congratulations my friend on POTD with this beauty, your poetry is always worth reading again and again, it can brighten anyone's day :) hugs

Chris Green
Date: 9/23/2019 9:45:00 AM

Thanks so much my friend

Tania Kitchin

Date: 9/21/2019 2:09:00 PM

Chris, congratulations on POTD with your beautifully written poem with beautiful imagery!

Chris Green
Date: 9/23/2019 9:45:00 AM

Thanks so much Tania

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 9/21/2019 12:59:00 PM

Hi Chris, Congratulations, an awesome repost of a wonderful poem that you were awarded POTD for. Hugs Jennifer.

Chris Green
Date: 9/23/2019 9:44:00 AM

Thank you Jennifer

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/21/2019 11:43:00 AM

- Congratulations on your beautiful p.o.t.d., Chris :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Chris Green
Date: 9/23/2019 9:44:00 AM

Thank you Anne-Lise

Sunlite Wanter

Date: 9/21/2019 10:33:00 AM

Congratulations! So deserving!

Chris Green
Date: 9/23/2019 9:44:00 AM

Thank you so much my friend

Mark Toney

Date: 9/21/2019 10:06:00 AM

Beautiful music to my ears, Chris. Congratulations on Poem of the Day! ~Mark

Chris Green
Date: 9/23/2019 9:43:00 AM

Thank you Mark

John Gondolf

Date: 9/21/2019 9:03:00 AM

This certainly was worth reposting, I didn't see it the first time. I enjoyed this whimsical romantic write, metered beautifully. Congrats on POTD, Chris. John

Chris Green
Date: 9/23/2019 9:43:00 AM

Thank you so much John

Joseph May

Date: 9/21/2019 8:55:00 AM

An enchanting melody, ...Beautifully penned...Congrats on POTD Chris..

Chris Green
Date: 9/23/2019 9:43:00 AM

Thanks Joseph

Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 9/21/2019 7:13:00 AM

Love this, Chris, in all its elements and entirety ... your work never disappoints! Congratulations on Poem of the Day - a perfect one. Blessings! :o)

Chris Green
Date: 9/23/2019 9:43:00 AM

Thank you so much Greg

Winged Warrior

Date: 9/21/2019 5:23:00 AM

Back to Congrats!! on your POTD!! Chris...deserving of honor my friend...^WW^ :o)

Chris Green
Date: 9/23/2019 9:42:00 AM

Thanks so much my friend

Jan Allison

Date: 9/21/2019 2:58:00 AM

Absolutely gorgeous imagery Chris this is music to my ears, I especially loved the 2nd and third stanzas and the poem is very well deserving of POTD:-) into my faves:-) hugs Jan xx

Chris Green
Date: 9/23/2019 9:42:00 AM

Thank you Jan. So very much

John Hamilton

Date: 9/20/2019 9:56:00 AM

I remember this one Chris, still shines bright second time around!

Chris Green
Date: 9/20/2019 10:09:00 AM

Thanks so much John.

Heidi Sands

Date: 9/20/2019 9:22:00 AM

This one is packed with so many good lines. ! I can feel the song today :)

Chris Green
Date: 9/20/2019 10:06:00 AM

Thank you so very much my friend. Happy you liked this one.

Brenda Chiri

Date: 9/20/2019 1:50:00 AM

Beautifully written!;)

Brenda Chiri
Date: 9/20/2019 8:41:00 AM

I probably did but doesn't make it any less beautiful! Plus when I deleted my old account all my comments were deleted to! So it's a win win!;)

Chris Green
Date: 9/20/2019 8:11:00 AM

Thank you so very much Brenda. I am happy you found this one and enjoyed it so much but I think you may have seen this one before so thank you extra much for reading and commenting again. : )