Agnes Krampe Poet Monorhyme

Twilight

The blackbirds alight at their sleeping site
as bushes ignite with fireflies’ light
that dance, flashing bright, in their courtship rite.
The bats rise in flight with sound as their sight.
The full moon swims white through velvety night.
I watch with delight and settle to write.

4/26/2017
For contest: Rhymers’ delight - Internal Monorhyme
Sponsored by John Hamilton

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Line Gauthier July 26, 2018 at 9:14 PM A perfect setting for writing, Agnes... most places in nature are...

Harshita Chaudhary November 12, 2017 at 8:43 AM Beautiful. Congrats.

Joseph May April 30, 2017 at 4:39 PM Congrats on your win Agnes

Sandra Haight April 30, 2017 at 3:42 PM Back to congratulate you on your win, Agnes. Again, I enjoyed your wonderful imagery and rhythm in your poem. Hugs, Sandra

John Hamilton April 30, 2017 at 2:30 PM Great write Agnes, you have the ability to try a more difficult rhyme, try not to repeat words eg white 2x light 4x and you will place higher, thanks so much for the entry! John Hamilton May 1, 2017 at 7:34 PM This is really good now! Agnes Krampe April 30, 2017 at 5:39 PM Thank you, John. I can't believe I didn't edit out the first "white"; that was meant to be "bright" and I never fixed it in the posted version. My apology. I know I should not repeat! Will do better next time. Agnes Krampe April 30, 2017 at 5:39 PM I am changing it now, anyway, because it bugs me.

Emile Pinet April 28, 2017 at 6:27 PM This poem is light and refreshing, your emotions and wit wrap themselves around your words and the effect is magic to the reader. Emile. Agnes Krampe April 30, 2017 at 8:27 AM Thanks for your kind comment, Emile.

Joseph May April 28, 2017 at 3:40 PM Very nicely done Agnes...best wishes Agnes Krampe April 30, 2017 at 8:27 AM Thanks!

Afolabi Muideen April 27, 2017 at 4:49 PM it is great that you decide after the beautiful scene. Agnes Krampe April 30, 2017 at 8:26 AM Thank you.

Shubham Kamble April 27, 2017 at 6:56 AM Wonderful write :) Good luck for the contest !! Agnes Krampe April 27, 2017 at 7:15 AM Thank you, Shubham.

Darren White April 27, 2017 at 2:40 AM What a great monorhyme, it's perfectly flowing as if there's not difficulty maintaining this the ay you did. Good luck in the contest :) Agnes Krampe April 27, 2017 at 7:14 AM Thank you, Darren.

John Michaels April 27, 2017 at 2:18 AM Delightful piece, Agnes! I hope to see it place high in the contest! Good luck. Regards, John. Agnes Krampe April 27, 2017 at 7:14 AM Thanks, John. I hope it does well.

Carole Duet April 27, 2017 at 12:19 AM Lovely write, Agnes. So imaginative! Good luck in the contest. Agnes Krampe April 27, 2017 at 7:14 AM Thank you, Carole.

Andrea Dietrich April 26, 2017 at 11:06 PM Replying to your reply: Yes, that is what makes Soup a crazy POT!! Agnes Krampe April 27, 2017 at 7:14 AM Yes, that is true. It is a soup with many different flavors.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart April 26, 2017 at 10:16 PM Lovely! :) 7 xomo! Agnes Krampe April 27, 2017 at 7:13 AM Thanks, Maureen.

Andrea Dietrich April 26, 2017 at 6:00 PM GREAT job with the internal rhyme, Agnes. Sure to do well in the contest. Agnes Krampe April 26, 2017 at 6:31 PM Thanks, Andrea. I don't know about contests; a number of poems that I was pretty sure should do well did not place at all... so I'm not holding my breath.

Darlene De Beaulieu April 26, 2017 at 2:32 PM Hello Angnes, you paint a pretty picture in your poetry. It made me feel I was in that setting. You get a7 Nice to meet you. Agnes Krampe April 27, 2017 at 7:13 AM Thank you for visiting, Darlene.

Sandra Haight April 26, 2017 at 2:02 PM Wonderful, Agnes! So full of imagery with excellent flow and well-chosen rhymes. Well done and perfect for the contest! Best wishes. 7 Hugs, Sandra Agnes Krampe April 27, 2017 at 7:12 AM Thank you, Sandra.

Chris Green April 26, 2017 at 1:14 PM Really nice Agnes. I love the bats using sounds as their sight. Best wishes in the contest my friend. Agnes Krampe April 27, 2017 at 7:12 AM Thanks, Chris - the cool thing is that bats really DO :)

Jan Allison April 26, 2017 at 1:05 PM what a wonderful descriptive monorhyme which flows so beautifully:- good luck in the contest Agnes:-) hugs Jan xx Agnes Krampe April 27, 2017 at 7:11 AM Thank you, Jan.