Twilight

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Twilight blue hours of that day sunlight scattering across earth’s low horizons both dawn and dusk silhouettes insects sing loud evensongs 9/22/16

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Jan Allison

Date: 9/25/2016 3:16:00 PM

Very beautiful Janis - many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx

Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 9/25/2016 5:19:00 PM

Thanks, Jan.

Lu Loo

Date: 9/25/2016 11:42:00 AM

sweet Janis I love the second to last line, very lovely imagery and I have always loved the word "silhouettes"- congratulations on your placement! :)-luloo

Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 9/25/2016 5:19:00 PM

Thanks, Laura

Agnes Krampe

Date: 9/25/2016 3:50:00 AM

Congrats, Janis. I especially love the last line.

Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 9/25/2016 5:20:00 PM

Thanks, Agnes.

Joyce Johnson

Date: 9/24/2016 9:40:00 PM

Congratulations on your win with a great Tanka and thank you for your kind words about my entry. Love, Joyce

Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 9/25/2016 5:21:00 PM

Fine entry. Thanks.

Daniel Turner

Date: 9/24/2016 8:03:00 PM

I am a huge fan of poets who write short poems that say a lot. Congratulations on this beautiful poem, Janis. I think it takes a lot of talent to express one's self in very few words. Well done! Stunning photo too:)

Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 9/24/2016 9:34:00 PM

I appreciate your comments, Daniel.