Twilight

exploring mind and soul
hands travel slowly a path they know
love lingers in twilight

lovehaiku

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Stephen Parker

January 20, 2011 at 12:04 PM

You have kung fued the Haiku formula. But a very well-written, substantive verse! Intersting that you write about love making from a female perspective. You began by exploring the metaphysical qualities of the mind and soul in the first verse. In the second verse, you caress the physical parts of your lover. You are a good boy. Your women have trained you well. Enjoyed your thoughts on love making.