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Twilight

day
gloaming
afternoon
twilight settles
night will be here soon
sun disappears
evening falls
moon shines
night

sunsetninette

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Linda Alice Fowler

August 21, 2023 at 1:42 PM

Lovely day to night my dear friend. The passing of beautiful time. Congratulations Svvie! :)

Speaks Volumes

May 28, 2025 at 9:50 PM

OH LAF how could have forgotten to thank you???

Paula Goldsmith

August 21, 2023 at 10:02 AM

Back with congratulations. I enjoyed reading this lovely write again. I enjoyed the pretty sunset picture. Have a blessed/great day.............

Sara Kendrick

August 21, 2023 at 2:28 AM

Congratulations!! Way to go with this excellent winner. Sara

Speaks Volumes

August 21, 2023 at 2:35 AM

Thank you so much Sara. Your comment is valued.

Terry Miller

August 21, 2023 at 2:04 AM

Another winner SV; congratulations

Speaks Volumes

August 21, 2023 at 2:34 AM

Thanks Terry. Best wishes SV

Anne-Lise Andresen

August 20, 2023 at 10:01 AM

- Congratulations on your winning poem ... beautifully described, S.V. :) - hugs

Speaks Volumes

August 20, 2023 at 10:09 AM

Thank you sweet Anne-Lise. I appreciate you commenting. It is really appreciated.

Ink Empress

August 20, 2023 at 7:20 AM

Evening falls moon shines. How gorgeous is your ninette. A most deserved win. Congratulations. I absolutely love the imagery here

Speaks Volumes

August 20, 2023 at 9:36 AM

Thank you, is it OK to call you "Inky"? So pleased you took the time to comment on my poem. Its really appreciated. Best wishes from SV

Kim Merryman

August 19, 2023 at 5:47 PM

Speaks Volumes, I like the descriptive progression of time in your ninette! Congrats on your win in my contest! Blessings, Kim M

Speaks Volumes

August 19, 2023 at 5:53 PM

Thank you so much Kim. Thanks for sponsoring an interesting contest.

Bill Baker

August 15, 2023 at 1:44 PM

Great write on the Ninette, SV. I like the use of day / night for the first and last words. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill

Speaks Volumes

August 16, 2023 at 5:32 PM

Thank you so much Bill, I appreciate your comment. Best wishes SV

Andrea Dietrich

August 13, 2023 at 3:09 PM

Great job here. I am eager to try this one too.

Speaks Volumes

August 16, 2023 at 5:32 PM

Thank you so much Andrea, you comment is appreciated.

Paula Goldsmith

August 13, 2023 at 12:49 PM

A lovely write/picture. I enjoy the pretty sunset time of the day. Have a great day/week.............

Speaks Volumes

August 16, 2023 at 5:32 PM

Thank you so much Paula, sweet of you to comment

Jay Narain

August 13, 2023 at 11:38 AM

Nice and short Ninette, Beautiful,

Speaks Volumes

August 16, 2023 at 5:32 PM

Thank you so much Jay, your comments are always appreciated.

Darlene De Beaulieu

August 13, 2023 at 10:42 AM

Hello Speaks Volumes, a beautiful poem. twight is when the darkness begins. Lasy night i saw a cloud that was blue the shape was a heart. Above the heart shape cloud was a pink cloud. it was beautiful. I am also a cloud watcher. Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene\

Darlene De Beaulieu

August 17, 2023 at 2:48 PM

Hello Speaks Volumes, Oh, your welcome. Enjoy your ev ening my friend. /Darlene\

Speaks Volumes

August 16, 2023 at 5:33 PM

Thank you so much Darlene, what a lovely comment