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Twilight

TWILIGHT tangerine horizon tantalizing senses, trilling homecoming birds... tweeting mates in warm nests, transcends ordinary trifles of daily life to great magnificence. April 26, 2021 For Pleiades T Poetry Contest Sponsor: Kim Merryman Syllables checked by howmanysyllables.com

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Kim Merryman

Date: 4/29/2021 8:44:00 AM

Mala, your Pleiades describes "twilight" beautifully and is so peaceful! Congrats on your win in my contest! Blessings, Kim M

Anitha Jayasankar

Date: 4/29/2021 12:25:00 AM

You have created such a beautiful imagery of twilight with this dear Mala... Loved the first three lines more... Congrats on your win.. Hugs.. ~ Ani

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 4/29/2021 6:56:00 AM

Thanks, Anitha. Twilight is my most favourite time of the day, when birds return to their nests - so calming! Love ~ Mala

Marilene Evans

Date: 4/27/2021 8:57:00 PM

Mala, such a charming poem. Congrats.

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 4/28/2021 10:07:00 AM

Thanks, Marilene. Appreciate your comments. Love ~ Mala

Eve Roper

Date: 4/27/2021 7:52:00 PM

Great Pleiades, Malabika, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 4/28/2021 10:07:00 AM

Thank you so much, Eve. Glad you liked it. Love ~ Mala

Jcb Brul

Date: 10/11/2020 2:02:00 AM

I love this poem! I can feel the sublime serenity so vividly depicted with just few words. A winner for me though not submitted for a contest.

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 10/11/2020 9:22:00 AM

Thank you, my friend. Now I really regret not submitting it for the contest. Probably I had a chance! Ha ha! Love, Mala

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/10/2020 5:16:00 PM

I like this, Malabika. I see no congrats, so the only reason I can see if you did not get a win is that you have to list the contest sponsor's name in her contests!

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 10/10/2020 6:30:00 PM

Hi Andrea, so sweet of you! Although I was inspired to write one, I did not enter this poem for the contest. Thanks for being so kind! Love, Mala

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 10/9/2020 11:24:00 AM

Hello Mala the birds are still asleep in twilight. Enjoy your day my friend. Love Darlene

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/10/2020 6:42:00 AM

Hello Mala, I also like it when the birds return to their nest. I enjoy their songs. Love, Darlene.

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 10/9/2020 5:43:00 PM

Hi Darlene, Thank you so much. Enjoy the feeling of birds returning to their nests. Love, Mala