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Twenty-Four Hours and Counting (Audrey)

Jesus help my family when I'm gone O God, be merciful to my family Bless the good I've sown O God, be merciful to me Spare me from the evil I've shown O God, be merciful to me My loves are close to my heart; my loves are close at home O God, be merciful to my family One more second, one more day to be known God has been merciful to me! For Audrey's contest themed one day left to live in the kyrielle form.

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James Fraser

Date: 8/16/2010 11:03:00 AM

Many congratulations Doris on your win in Audrey's fine contest >> James

Virginia Mitchell

Date: 8/16/2010 3:32:00 AM

This is a wonderful winning 'prayer' poem! Congrats!:)

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/15/2010 8:19:00 PM

Congrats on the win, Doris

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/15/2010 7:28:00 PM

Congrats Doris on your winning poem in Audrey's contest just finalized tonight.. a wonderful write and win for u to enjoy my friend.. with luv from Italy..ciao..luv...

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 8/15/2010 1:48:00 PM

You already know I enjoyed this fine poem, so just let me offer my congratulations, Doris!

Audrey Haick

Date: 8/15/2010 12:15:00 PM

Thanks for submitting your wonderful poem for my first sponsored contest. And congratulations on your 10th Place win, Doris. Peace, love, Audrey

Tim Ryerson

Date: 7/7/2010 3:59:00 PM

Very well done, Doris...I especially like the total unselfishness shown in your poem...no concern for yourself but only your loved ones...Very nice indeed and good luck in Audrey's contest! - Tim

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/4/2010 12:58:00 PM

Great write that should be in the winner's circle...Excellent my child..Good luck..Keep the creative pen flowing..Mom

Wilma Neels

Date: 7/4/2010 12:24:00 PM

Awesome entry Doris, all the best.. Happy 4th of July to you, love Wilma

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/4/2010 12:21:00 PM

this is nice and thoughtful Doris, enjoyed your poem, also have your self a wonderful & safe 4th of july. Looks nice outside today,. and good luck in the contest,..p..d

Diiamond Rich

Date: 7/4/2010 9:45:00 AM

I'm sure there won't be any problems in the higher power department. Loved this faithful piece here. Enjoy ya day>>>

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 7/4/2010 8:47:00 AM

Great use of the kyrielle form, Doris. I would be praying on my last day as well. Best wishes for Audrey's contest! Love, Carolyn

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 7/4/2010 7:46:00 AM

A wonderful entry to the contest. Good luck

Timothy Brumley

Date: 7/4/2010 7:26:00 AM

Doris, I pray this same prayer every day! And if I had but one day left to live, I think I'd spend half of it on the phone saying 'Goodbye', and the other half on my knees saying 'Hello'. You have S-mail. And good luck in the contest!

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 7/3/2010 8:23:00 PM

A wonderful entry for the contest. I am also thinking to enter it. Soup mail