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Twelve Hours Half a Day--Cq

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twelve hours half a day--CQ night surrenders saffron sky delves import tortoise export fledglings sand crabs popout penguins waddle porpoises play zenith star slips 2019 August 31 *1st Place* Charlie-Quadku ~~charles messina

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Eve Roper
Date: 9/25/2019 10:37:00 PM
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Great poem,William, congratulations on your win. :)
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 9/22/2019 2:18:00 PM
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I love your imagery in this short form William. I think it is kind of sad that the mother turtle never gets to raise her hatchlings and they are on their own though. Congratulations on your wonderful deserving First Place win! : ) xxoo
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Hilo Poet
Date: 9/22/2019 2:54:00 PM
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Thanks, Connie, in muggy no huggie Hilo ~ Aloha always William
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 9/21/2019 9:33:00 AM
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An awesome haiku, William, and quite unique. Congratulations on taking first place in Charlie's contest! Best wishes, Carolyn
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Hilo Poet
Date: 9/21/2019 9:41:00 AM
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My extended gratitude indeed--most welcoming ~ Aloha always William
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Sandra Adams
Date: 9/20/2019 7:20:00 PM
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back to say congrats on your top win my friend :) hugs
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Hilo Poet
Date: 9/20/2019 7:47:00 PM
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My heartfelt thanks for your bestowing to this enlightened soul ~ Aloha always William
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 9/20/2019 5:45:00 PM
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I love the imagery for the animals here, William. Congrats on a top win.
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Hilo Poet
Date: 9/20/2019 6:00:00 PM
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Today, be awake longer to offer the Sun reason to shine a bit more ~ Aloha always William.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/19/2019 8:15:00 AM
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WOW! Splendid imagery in just a few words. Congrats, William.
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Hilo Poet
Date: 9/19/2019 8:42:00 AM
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You honor me so ~ Aloha always William
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Constance La France
Date: 9/18/2019 11:27:00 AM
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William, congratulations on your win .. wonderful poem, images and reading.
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Hilo Poet
Date: 9/18/2019 12:08:00 PM
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My thanks Constance for true guidance, Grace upon you my friend! ~ Aloha always, William
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Anisha Dutta
Date: 9/18/2019 11:04:00 AM
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EXCELLENT. BIG CONGRATS to win TOP. Blessings
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Hilo Poet
Date: 9/18/2019 12:06:00 PM
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Again my kindest regards!
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Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 9/18/2019 8:04:00 AM
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Wonderful imagery in your quadku. Congrats on your top win.
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Hilo Poet
Date: 9/18/2019 8:10:00 AM
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You have my appreciation! Jeanne!
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Charles Messina
Date: 9/18/2019 6:00:00 AM
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Love the imagery on this very well done poem William. congratulations on your 1st place win. All the best...Charlie
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Hilo Poet
Date: 9/18/2019 6:06:00 AM
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Whoa! Lands of Goshen Batman!!! I'm just tickled pink polka dots. I just can't believe my skies--the limit! Thanks man!
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Sandra Adams
Date: 8/31/2019 9:07:00 AM
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Oh I love the way you unfold the day, beautiful images, great entry for the contest in my opinion :) hugs
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Hilo Poet
Date: 8/31/2019 9:54:00 AM
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Simple preconceived words from past write--thanks for the encouragement on this mopey say--raining, ~ A soggy Aloha William

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