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twelve hours half a day--CQ night surrenders saffron sky delves import tortoise export fledglings sand crabs popout penguins waddle porpoises play zenith star slips 2019 August 31 *1st Place* Charlie-Quadku ~~charles messina

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Date: 9/25/2019 10:37:00 PM
Great poem,William, congratulations on your win. :)
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Date: 9/22/2019 2:18:00 PM
I love your imagery in this short form William. I think it is kind of sad that the mother turtle never gets to raise her hatchlings and they are on their own though. Congratulations on your wonderful deserving First Place win! : ) xxoo
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William Kekaula
Date: 9/22/2019 2:54:00 PM
Thanks, Connie, in muggy no huggie Hilo ~ Aloha always William
Date: 9/21/2019 9:33:00 AM
An awesome haiku, William, and quite unique. Congratulations on taking first place in Charlie's contest! Best wishes, Carolyn
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William Kekaula
Date: 9/21/2019 9:41:00 AM
My extended gratitude indeed--most welcoming ~ Aloha always William
Date: 9/20/2019 7:20:00 PM
back to say congrats on your top win my friend :) hugs
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William Kekaula
Date: 9/20/2019 7:47:00 PM
My heartfelt thanks for your bestowing to this enlightened soul ~ Aloha always William
Date: 9/20/2019 5:45:00 PM
I love the imagery for the animals here, William. Congrats on a top win.
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William Kekaula
Date: 9/20/2019 6:00:00 PM
Today, be awake longer to offer the Sun reason to shine a bit more ~ Aloha always William.
Date: 9/19/2019 8:15:00 AM
WOW! Splendid imagery in just a few words. Congrats, William.
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William Kekaula
Date: 9/19/2019 8:42:00 AM
You honor me so ~ Aloha always William
Date: 9/18/2019 11:27:00 AM
William, congratulations on your win .. wonderful poem, images and reading.
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William Kekaula
Date: 9/18/2019 12:08:00 PM
My thanks Constance for true guidance, Grace upon you my friend! ~ Aloha always, William
Date: 9/18/2019 11:04:00 AM
EXCELLENT. BIG CONGRATS to win TOP. Blessings
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William Kekaula
Date: 9/18/2019 12:06:00 PM
Again my kindest regards!
Date: 9/18/2019 8:04:00 AM
Wonderful imagery in your quadku. Congrats on your top win.
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William Kekaula
Date: 9/18/2019 8:10:00 AM
You have my appreciation! Jeanne!
Date: 9/18/2019 6:00:00 AM
Love the imagery on this very well done poem William. congratulations on your 1st place win. All the best...Charlie
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William Kekaula
Date: 9/18/2019 6:06:00 AM
Whoa! Lands of Goshen Batman!!! I'm just tickled pink polka dots. I just can't believe my skies--the limit! Thanks man!
Date: 8/31/2019 9:07:00 AM
Oh I love the way you unfold the day, beautiful images, great entry for the contest in my opinion :) hugs
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William Kekaula
Date: 8/31/2019 9:54:00 AM
Simple preconceived words from past write--thanks for the encouragement on this mopey say--raining, ~ A soggy Aloha William