Fin Chuuk Poet Romanticism

Twas the Night I Met You

‘twas the night I met you.
A heart-stopping glorious man,
Possibly an Angel abandoning Heaven to master the art of earthly sensuality.
With dazzling electric blue eyes locked with mine,
Star-struck - I was breathlessly captured.
Too paralyze to move or speak,
I fell under your spell with pleasure.
And for that poignant ephemeral moment 
my heart was delightfully taking its fill.

Although I knew not where you came from,
and there was a bell of warning clanging loudly in the back of my head.
Still nothing was going to be in the way.
Words needn’t be spoken aloud.
My heart defies all and embraces you in.
I’m yours to be devoured anyway.

Then like a velvet dream,
Your warm breath whispering along my skin as if stealing illicit kisses.
Drowning me into an undeniable blazing wanton desire and need.
Feverishly - together we claimed each other with pure satisfaction.
And ‘twas that night,
I knew happiness.


Fin Chuuk
3/13/23

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Speaks Volumes July 20, 2023 at 1:43 AM I miss you.

Valsa George March 14, 2023 at 11:00 PM A sensuous description of a moment when your heart was stolen by an electric presence ! This moment culminated into a night when a 'blazing wanton desire' was fulfilled and you claimed each other. Intensely romantic, dear Fin. Fin Chuuk March 15, 2023 at 7:51 AM Valsa, your beautiful comment warmed me greatly. Thank you so very much, dear. I truly appreciate it. :)

Susan Lawrence March 14, 2023 at 10:20 PM A delicious escape into your velvet dream and heart of sensual pleasure dear Fin . A gift to read your journey and sense your heart at work … loved it ! Cheers, Susan :) Fin Chuuk March 15, 2023 at 7:47 AM Hi, Susan, how wonderful to read your lovely comment. Thank you so much, I greatly appreciate it. :)

William P. Harris Sr. March 14, 2023 at 9:00 PM Well done Fin Chuuk March 15, 2023 at 7:46 AM Thank you, William :)

Gershon Wolf March 14, 2023 at 7:42 PM I'm running for the fire extinguisher, Fin. Whoa! A hot one! ~ Sunny Fin Chuuk March 14, 2023 at 8:38 PM OMG, you got me crakin’ here, and I’m delighted you enjoyed it. Thank you so much, Sunny. :) ~ Fin

Lisa Ricci March 14, 2023 at 1:46 PM Hello Fin. I agree with Andrea. Wowser and wowser again. I love to write of romance and love thus when seeing your title I just had to turn the page and you did not disappoint. This entry sentiment and it all is beautiful with all elements attached. It was an honor turning to your page and entry. Welcome to PoetrySoup. Take Care. (smile) Fin Chuuk March 14, 2023 at 8:36 PM Dear Lisa, your most beautiful and sweet comment just make wanna keep writing. So positive. I truly am grateful and appreciate you so much. Again, thank you. ~ Fin

Andrea Dietrich March 14, 2023 at 1:14 PM wowser, a VERY romantic poem. Love it. Fin Chuuk March 14, 2023 at 8:32 PM Andrea, thank you so much :)

Robert Gorelick March 14, 2023 at 12:29 PM An illusively sensuous tryst of romantic desire! A dramatically buoyant write, Fin, Robert Fin Chuuk March 14, 2023 at 12:39 PM I thank you, Robert for your beautiful comment, I greatly appreciate it. :)

Demetrios Trifiatis March 14, 2023 at 8:38 AM Apotheosis of admiration, sensuality, and love, so masterfully created, dear Fin. Be blessed. Fin Chuuk March 14, 2023 at 10:43 AM My dear friend Dem, how wonderful it is to be gifted such comment. Always always grateful whenever you stop by. Thank you so much. :)

Paula Goldsmith March 14, 2023 at 8:37 AM A lovely story/write/ending. Have a blessed day writing away............ Fin Chuuk March 14, 2023 at 10:38 AM Thank you so much, dear Paula :)

Paul Callus March 14, 2023 at 6:35 AM Definitely a night to remember, Fin! Star-struck; love at first sight; sensuality and passion. Could not get any more romantic than this! ~ Regards // paul Fin Chuuk March 14, 2023 at 7:15 AM Dear Paul, I’m beaming with joy reading this enchanting comment you left me. Thank you so much my friend. Hugs :)

Joanna Daniel March 14, 2023 at 1:30 AM Passion pours out wonderfully, Fin:) Fin Chuuk March 14, 2023 at 7:13 AM Jo, thank you so much :)

Joseph May March 14, 2023 at 1:07 AM A write filled with passion and desire, Very nicely done Fin, thank you for your comments on my poem Fin Chuuk March 14, 2023 at 7:13 AM Thank you so much, Joseph. I do enjoy reading your amazing poems. :)

Mystic Rose Rose March 13, 2023 at 11:05 PM Wow, love the ending, cherry on the cake, Fin Chuuk March 14, 2023 at 7:12 AM Thank you my beautiful friend :)

Speaks Volumes March 13, 2023 at 8:34 PM Explosive. Rapture lust and love all wrapped in one beautiful poem.. Lovely Fin A symphony of words. Fin Chuuk March 14, 2023 at 7:12 AM Dear Wendy, how you make me smile with your enchanting comment. Thank you so much :)

Sotto Poet March 13, 2023 at 7:58 PM It was like being in silk dreaming, Fin. An exquisitely passionate, sensuous, and gorgeous read. Fin Chuuk March 14, 2023 at 7:11 AM Thank you so much, Sotto Poet, I enjoyed your kind visit and comment. :)

Beryl Edmonds March 13, 2023 at 7:39 PM Truly a velvet dream Fin, romantic sensual and beautiful, an enjoyable read… Belle Fin Chuuk March 14, 2023 at 7:10 AM Belle, you’re So kind and sweet. I greatly appreciate all of your visits and comments on my poems. Thank you :)

Kim Rodrigues March 13, 2023 at 7:21 PM Romantic with a bit of a warning. Hugs ~ Kim Fin Chuuk March 14, 2023 at 7:08 AM Thank you, Kim :)

Darlene De Beaulieu March 13, 2023 at 10:35 AM Hello Fin, this poem is delightful. also romantic. Enjoy your day my friend. Darlene De Beaulieu March 14, 2023 at 10:21 AM Hello Fin, you are b=very welcome. Enjoyyour day my friend./Darlene/ Fin Chuuk March 13, 2023 at 5:00 PM Hello my friend, thank you so much for your visit and lovely comment, I appreciate it :)

Vijay Pandit March 13, 2023 at 6:23 AM Full of allure from start to finish, Fin. This night of romance you depicted was indeed a velvet dream--as you say. Much enjoyed the anticipation and intrigue. A FAVE from me. Fin Chuuk March 13, 2023 at 4:59 PM Vijay, you honored me. You’re so sweet my friend, thank you so much :)

Anne-Lise Andresen March 13, 2023 at 6:05 AM - Yes, "like a velvet dream" ... really, Fin :) - Beautiful and romantic :) - hugs Fin Chuuk March 13, 2023 at 4:57 PM Thank you so much, my beautiful friend :)

Daniel Turner March 13, 2023 at 5:43 AM Nicely penned, Fin. Free verse is difficult for me. You do it very good. Fin Chuuk March 13, 2023 at 4:57 PM Danny, always a pleasure to have your feed back. Thank you :)

Victor Buhagiar March 13, 2023 at 3:15 AM Quite romantic. Fin Chuuk March 13, 2023 at 4:56 PM Vic, my friend, thank you :)

Sara Kendrick March 13, 2023 at 3:06 AM Passionate lines penned. Very descriptive. Thanks for sharing and for your visit to my page. Sara Fin Chuuk March 13, 2023 at 4:55 PM Thank you so much, Sara. Your lovely comment is greatly appreciated :)