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Twas the Night I Met You

‘twas the night I met you.
A heart-stopping glorious man,
Possibly an Angel abandoning Heaven to master the art of earthly sensuality.
With dazzling electric blue eyes locked with mine,
Star-struck - I was breathlessly captured.
Too paralyze to move or speak,
I fell under your spell with pleasure.
And for that poignant ephemeral moment 
my heart was delightfully taking its fill.

Although I knew not where you came from,
and there was a bell of warning clanging loudly in the back of my head.
Still nothing was going to be in the way.
Words needn’t be spoken aloud.
My heart defies all and embraces you in.
I’m yours to be devoured anyway.

Then like a velvet dream,
Your warm breath whispering along my skin as if stealing illicit kisses.
Drowning me into an undeniable blazing wanton desire and need.
Feverishly - together we claimed each other with pure satisfaction.
And ‘twas that night,
I knew happiness.


Fin Chuuk
3/13/23

Copyright © Fin Chuuk | Year Posted 2023

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Speaks Volumes Date: 7/20/2023 1:43:00 AM I miss you. Login to Reply

Valsa George Date: 3/14/2023 11:00:00 PM A sensuous description of a moment when your heart was stolen by an electric presence ! This moment culminated into a night when a 'blazing wanton desire' was fulfilled and you claimed each other. Intensely romantic, dear Fin. Login to Reply Fin Chuuk Date: 3/15/2023 7:51:00 AM Valsa, your beautiful comment warmed me greatly. Thank you so very much, dear. I truly appreciate it. :)

Susan Lawrence Date: 3/14/2023 10:20:00 PM A delicious escape into your velvet dream and heart of sensual pleasure dear Fin . A gift to read your journey and sense your heart at work … loved it ! Cheers, Susan :) Login to Reply Fin Chuuk Date: 3/15/2023 7:47:00 AM Hi, Susan, how wonderful to read your lovely comment. Thank you so much, I greatly appreciate it. :)

William P. Harris Date: 3/14/2023 9:00:00 PM Well done Login to Reply Fin Chuuk Date: 3/15/2023 7:46:00 AM Thank you, William :)

Gershon Wolf Date: 3/14/2023 7:42:00 PM I'm running for the fire extinguisher, Fin. Whoa! A hot one! ~ Sunny Login to Reply Fin Chuuk Date: 3/14/2023 8:38:00 PM OMG, you got me crakin’ here, and I’m delighted you enjoyed it. Thank you so much, Sunny. :) ~ Fin

Lisa Ricci Date: 3/14/2023 1:46:00 PM Hello Fin. I agree with Andrea. Wowser and wowser again. I love to write of romance and love thus when seeing your title I just had to turn the page and you did not disappoint. This entry sentiment and it all is beautiful with all elements attached. It was an honor turning to your page and entry. Welcome to PoetrySoup. Take Care. (smile) Login to Reply Fin Chuuk Date: 3/14/2023 8:36:00 PM Dear Lisa, your most beautiful and sweet comment just make wanna keep writing. So positive. I truly am grateful and appreciate you so much. Again, thank you. ~ Fin

Andrea Dietrich Date: 3/14/2023 1:14:00 PM wowser, a VERY romantic poem. Love it. Login to Reply Fin Chuuk Date: 3/14/2023 8:32:00 PM Andrea, thank you so much :)

Robert Gorelick Date: 3/14/2023 12:29:00 PM An illusively sensuous tryst of romantic desire! A dramatically buoyant write, Fin, Robert Login to Reply Fin Chuuk Date: 3/14/2023 12:39:00 PM I thank you, Robert for your beautiful comment, I greatly appreciate it. :)

Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 3/14/2023 8:38:00 AM Apotheosis of admiration, sensuality, and love, so masterfully created, dear Fin. Be blessed. Login to Reply Fin Chuuk Date: 3/14/2023 10:43:00 AM My dear friend Dem, how wonderful it is to be gifted such comment. Always always grateful whenever you stop by. Thank you so much. :)

Paula Goldsmith Date: 3/14/2023 8:37:00 AM A lovely story/write/ending. Have a blessed day writing away............ Login to Reply Fin Chuuk Date: 3/14/2023 10:38:00 AM Thank you so much, dear Paula :)

Paul Callus Date: 3/14/2023 6:35:00 AM Definitely a night to remember, Fin! Star-struck; love at first sight; sensuality and passion. Could not get any more romantic than this! ~ Regards // paul Login to Reply Fin Chuuk Date: 3/14/2023 7:15:00 AM Dear Paul, I’m beaming with joy reading this enchanting comment you left me. Thank you so much my friend. Hugs :)

Joanna Daniel Date: 3/14/2023 1:30:00 AM Passion pours out wonderfully, Fin:) Login to Reply Fin Chuuk Date: 3/14/2023 7:13:00 AM Jo, thank you so much :)

Joseph May Date: 3/14/2023 1:07:00 AM A write filled with passion and desire, Very nicely done Fin, thank you for your comments on my poem Login to Reply Fin Chuuk Date: 3/14/2023 7:13:00 AM Thank you so much, Joseph. I do enjoy reading your amazing poems. :)

Mystic Rose Rose Date: 3/13/2023 11:05:00 PM Wow, love the ending, cherry on the cake, Login to Reply Fin Chuuk Date: 3/14/2023 7:12:00 AM Thank you my beautiful friend :)

Speaks Volumes Date: 3/13/2023 8:34:00 PM Explosive. Rapture lust and love all wrapped in one beautiful poem.. Lovely Fin A symphony of words. Login to Reply Fin Chuuk Date: 3/14/2023 7:12:00 AM Dear Wendy, how you make me smile with your enchanting comment. Thank you so much :)

Sotto Poet Date: 3/13/2023 7:58:00 PM It was like being in silk dreaming, Fin. An exquisitely passionate, sensuous, and gorgeous read. Login to Reply Fin Chuuk Date: 3/14/2023 7:11:00 AM Thank you so much, Sotto Poet, I enjoyed your kind visit and comment. :)

Beryl Edmonds Date: 3/13/2023 7:39:00 PM Truly a velvet dream Fin, romantic sensual and beautiful, an enjoyable read… Belle Login to Reply Fin Chuuk Date: 3/14/2023 7:10:00 AM Belle, you’re So kind and sweet. I greatly appreciate all of your visits and comments on my poems. Thank you :)

Kim Rodrigues Date: 3/13/2023 7:21:00 PM Romantic with a bit of a warning. Hugs ~ Kim Login to Reply Fin Chuuk Date: 3/14/2023 7:08:00 AM Thank you, Kim :)

Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 3/13/2023 10:35:00 AM Hello Fin, this poem is delightful. also romantic. Enjoy your day my friend. Login to Reply Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 3/14/2023 10:21:00 AM Hello Fin, you are b=very welcome. Enjoyyour day my friend./Darlene/ Fin Chuuk Date: 3/13/2023 5:00:00 PM Hello my friend, thank you so much for your visit and lovely comment, I appreciate it :)

Vijay Pandit Date: 3/13/2023 6:23:00 AM Full of allure from start to finish, Fin. This night of romance you depicted was indeed a velvet dream--as you say. Much enjoyed the anticipation and intrigue. A FAVE from me. Login to Reply Fin Chuuk Date: 3/13/2023 4:59:00 PM Vijay, you honored me. You’re so sweet my friend, thank you so much :)

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/13/2023 6:05:00 AM - Yes, "like a velvet dream" ... really, Fin :) - Beautiful and romantic :) - hugs Login to Reply Fin Chuuk Date: 3/13/2023 4:57:00 PM Thank you so much, my beautiful friend :)

Daniel Turner Date: 3/13/2023 5:43:00 AM Nicely penned, Fin. Free verse is difficult for me. You do it very good. Login to Reply Fin Chuuk Date: 3/13/2023 4:57:00 PM Danny, always a pleasure to have your feed back. Thank you :)

Victor Buhagiar Date: 3/13/2023 3:15:00 AM Quite romantic. Login to Reply Fin Chuuk Date: 3/13/2023 4:56:00 PM Vic, my friend, thank you :)

Sara Kendrick Date: 3/13/2023 3:06:00 AM Passionate lines penned. Very descriptive. Thanks for sharing and for your visit to my page. Sara Login to Reply Fin Chuuk Date: 3/13/2023 4:55:00 PM Thank you so much, Sara. Your lovely comment is greatly appreciated :)