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Twas Her Pure White Dove

Having met her beauty.. Upon our Wednesday stroll Girl, she was fine; intoxicating, like strawberry wine Taking my scratch thinking it was something be as, poetry But honestly, what did we know until her; she was so fresh to his novice Straight from splendour's heart; fell about silk, her soft palms Isles amid tiny perfumed notes swaying, their transic trees after she Crafting fairy tales while dancing atop waters her, milky way scenes ? Princess.... Mirror's rhyme moondust time; sprinkling lavender skies her carriage arrives in love, this night.

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Date: 5/24/2014 8:06:00 PM
beautiful, this softness of you. what splendor love is and the cleanliness of one so pure. have I missed you? Perhaps ~I do not day dream any longer but try to do God's work. Putting aside your spirit more than once visited me, stirring the essence of me; for the heart consists of the mind, emotions and spirit~ Always, Lucinda
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Date: 5/17/2014 4:04:00 PM
This is knocking on heavens door, with a beauty of endless time... through a poetic mind that loves words like me... what miracle of endless beautiful words.. you are giving me an inspiration... Jeremy his is work of art.. hugs Brooke
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Date: 5/12/2014 11:22:00 AM
Nothing impresses me more than a man that can truly express emotion great job
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Date: 5/12/2014 7:38:00 AM
Very romantic John!!Tnks for the mother's day wishes.Yes it was mother's day on the isle and my back yard bloomed with roses.
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Date: 5/11/2014 11:26:00 PM
You have such a way with your words! I received your comment.. Thank you :)
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