Turtles

baby turtles hatched
from sandy cradles, crawling...
to moon mirrored seas

8/16/22

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Kingston Avatar
March 24, 2023 at 10:25 PM
Your poem reminded me of the famous 100 year old Galapagos Island turtle named Lonesome George. When these little guys are born and desperately move to the water, I always wish I could help them. I agree with so many below, your phrase,"moon mirrored seas" holds such beautiful imagery. I'm happy to have found this one. It is lovely.
Gauthier Avatar
October 14, 2022 at 5:06 AM
Delightful, Michelle ~
Delaney Avatar
September 20, 2022 at 3:48 AM
Hi Michelle: What a fantastic Haiku you have written……I have witnessed turtles hatching in Hawaii and you have described the scene perfectly. Hugs, SuZ
Tor Avatar
September 9, 2022 at 1:39 PM
Michelle your Haiku creates such wonderful visualization of these turtles involving the moon. Enjoyed very much to read. Enjoy your weekend...
Peck Avatar
September 9, 2022 at 8:18 AM
I'm so glad you wrote about those tiny turtles crawling so fast to the sea and life! ...moon mirrored seas. Your Haiku is just lovely. Best of luck.
Watt Avatar
September 3, 2022 at 12:03 AM
I haven't seen turtles on a moon-mirrored sea (love that wording) but I have seen a grunion run a night, and it is a delight to behold. Lovely haiku, Michelle
Thomas Avatar
August 30, 2022 at 2:34 PM
A sight I yearn to see in person. Lovely Haiku Michelle :)
Wolf Avatar
August 28, 2022 at 7:28 PM
The pull of those seas, esp. when 'moon-mirrored.' ~ Sandy... Seriously, penned with a noble dignity, Michelle.
Tor Avatar
August 26, 2022 at 8:31 PM
Love this Michelle. The imagery says it all.
Dietrich Avatar
August 25, 2022 at 1:35 PM
for me this one is one of the best on the list. Congrats. I love this.
Baker Avatar
August 24, 2022 at 4:33 PM
Well written Haiku, my friend. Congrats on the contest win! Bill
Goldsmith Avatar
August 22, 2022 at 1:30 PM
Congratulations on your win. What a Wonderful write/story in just a few words. Have a blessed day writing away....................
Alex Avatar
August 22, 2022 at 7:59 AM
"moon mirrored seas" - Wow! Congratulations!
Kitchin Avatar
August 22, 2022 at 5:27 AM
Michelle, congratulations on your winning placement with your beautiful haiku!
Proxenos Avatar
August 20, 2022 at 2:42 AM
We have seen turtles eggs been laid by the turtle mummy - did not count but normally theY lay between 80 - 120 eggs - 60 days approximately later, these eggs hatch and these tiny babies scuttle down to the sea and the waves, about 1% survive as birds and crabs will eat them. Never seen it but it must be awesome yet so sad to watch. Love turtles so going to fave this fabulous Haiku Michelle. My comment is specific to Leather back turtles only, different species will vary love and hugs Jennifer
Zahid Avatar
August 19, 2022 at 9:49 AM
Moon mirrored seas.. Wow... Well penned
Ligon Avatar
August 18, 2022 at 7:45 AM
Your descriptions are so beautifully succinct. I can clearly picture the scene, so awe inspiring.
Faulkner Avatar
August 19, 2022 at 8:28 AM
Thank you so much, Juliet, I appreciate your time to read and comment~
Ashley Avatar
August 17, 2022 at 7:18 PM
Dear Michelle, every vibrant line shines in this beautiful haiku! So much to love here, both as a Nature scene and as a poetic gem. A fav! Warmest wishes, my inspiring friend.. ~Susan
Faulkner Avatar
August 19, 2022 at 8:27 AM
Thank you for the kind compliment and the fave, your poetry is inspiring to me as well!
Leffanta Avatar
August 17, 2022 at 11:08 AM
Always a joy to see! Aloha!
Leffanta Avatar
August 18, 2022 at 10:40 AM
From time to time, Sea Life Park on the island of O'ahu, liberates those it has raised with an Hawaiian ceremony, and it is indeed a joy to see them march into the sea! Aloha!
Faulkner Avatar
August 17, 2022 at 1:33 PM
I've seen them on nature documentaries but never in person, maybe one day~
Y. Avatar
August 16, 2022 at 3:44 PM
Hi Michelle, You have penned a well written and descriptive haiku. I enjoyed the view. Have a nice day-Alexis
Faulkner Avatar
August 17, 2022 at 1:32 PM
Thanks so much, Alexis!
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