Turquoise Sea Chimera

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                            11/15/2023

       You are my midnight love chimera.
       Beneath a turquoise sea.
       We met innocently and affably.
       Giggling and smiling, so innocently.

       But…passion’s gates opened wide.
       And its aquatic , aqueous mouth…
       Swallowed us, whole and most divine.
       Our soul’s instantaneously intertwined!

        What entity, created such instant intimacy.
        An under the deep sea, exotic gratification.



      .Chimera~ something that exists as an aspiration…
       but is not achievable in this world at all.
       Of Greek etymology.~ a fire-breathing monster 
       that has a lion’s head, a goat’s body and the
       tail of a snake!

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Date: 11/20/2023 7:38:00 PM
A fantasy beneath the sea, romantic and gratifying. :)
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Date: 11/20/2023 8:23:00 PM
Linda! Thank you very much. And I know that you know what I was thinking of in this poem…. Lol. I was thinking of an old song back in the 1940s before anyone who was born. You’re the cream in my coffee, you’re the salt a message too. Sounds like silly lines, nut so true. I am so glad you understand me))). Pamgie xx
Date: 11/17/2023 4:10:00 PM
Very creative and artfully penned poem, dear Pangie. Wondrous are your works. Have a tranquil evening, if that's possible. xxxxx
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Date: 11/17/2023 7:44:00 PM
Regina, apologies! I replied to this four hours ago and ir did not register?!so sorry, my friend!. I am so glas you enjoyed it. Wishing you a blessed evening amd weekend as well. Pangie xxxx
Date: 11/16/2023 10:57:00 PM
The camera captured this chimera quite Chim-chim-chimera!!! - Dick Van Dyke and Julie Andrews
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Date: 11/17/2023 1:12:00 AM
The poet is glad you liked the image!! Maybe will just post images from here on in! As if!….It’s an evil dependency as major poets do not use images..with poetry, do they? Send me a coloring bookAnyway.. ,, not writing, so the question is moot. Panagiota Romios
Date: 11/16/2023 1:54:00 AM
Your knowledge of Greek mythology is excellent. A lively poem, so original. Blessings.
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Date: 11/16/2023 12:22:00 PM
Victor, I made the corrections in my spelling errors. Apologies, Pangie
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Date: 11/16/2023 10:34:00 AM
Hi Victor, I wish I knew lt more. I know poet friends trained in this area. I loved to learn that in early Greece, potery was sung.so I like poetry that has some form or balance to it. I really liked this poem, too.there is much of me, in this write. Pangie xxx
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