Turquoise Chimera-Sea Fantasy

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You are my midnight love chimera. Beneath a deep aquamarine sea. We met innocently and affably, Giggling and smiling, so innocently. But…passion’s gates opened wide. And its aquatic, aqueous mouth… Swallowed us, whole and most divine. Our soul’s instantaneouslyintertwined! What entity, created divine, instant intimacy. An under the sea, divine, exotic gratification. 3/17/2024

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Regina Elliott

Date: 3/18/2024 11:58:00 AM

A very romantic and oceanic glory poem, dear Pangie. A grand penning. Bravo! xoxx

Panagiota Romios
Date: 3/19/2024 6:58:00 PM

The is an odd one. Would you love but I have to like it a lot for some reason I don’t know why.. Thank you for the wonderful compliments. Pangie xx

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 3/18/2024 7:10:00 AM

Dear Pangie, How beautifully you capture the allure and intensity of love, likening it to a midnight chimera beneath the sea. The imagery of passion's gates opening wide and souls intertwining instantly evokes a sense of divine intimacy. Pangie, what a mesmerizing journey through the depths of emotion and connection. A very enchanting sea fantasy. - Blessings, Daniel

Panagiota Romios
Date: 3/18/2024 10:33:00 AM

Good Day, Daniel.! Your comment delights my eyes and heart !I don’t suffer from vanity, neither do I have desire for constant affirmation, adoration or praise. That is the deadliest of dead ends. Long ago ,in a seminar in SF. I learned that ..I suffered for a thist for affirmation ..I had to learn that even if nobody acknowledged me, this was a call for me to learn that I have to “acknowledge myself first.” . Looking for appoval,..forget it. Look to approve of others..))) if online friends disappear that I know well, let them go! This was an experimental poem and much fun. Thanks for the thumbs up.. Hugs, Pangie xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/18/2024 5:13:00 AM

So cool. Your creativity knows no limits, Pangie.

Panagiota Romios
Date: 3/18/2024 9:33:00 AM

Andrea, i intend to stretch it to the limits in the daays and weeks ahead. Who knows what I will come up with! LOL Hugs, Pangie.xx

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 3/18/2024 3:35:00 AM

Love beneath the waves. So wonderfully written.

Panagiota Romios
Date: 3/18/2024 9:30:00 AM

Hello, Victor! How on point you are~ love beneath the seas! Mmmmm! I have a vivid imagination… Hugs, Pangie

Elena Eagle

Date: 3/17/2024 4:09:00 PM

A very beautiful poem. Very exotic and creative.

Panagiota Romios
Date: 3/17/2024 4:46:00 PM

Elena. Dig her pointed ears. Lol! It was a fun poem to pen. The chimera was written about in Greek sea mythology. I wanted to get off of “Rhyme Road” and take a dive into unknown waters that are unchartered It was fun. Freedom. Pangie xx