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You are my midnight love chimera. Beneath a deep aquamarine sea. We met innocently and affably, Giggling and smiling, so innocently. But…passion’s gates opened wide. And its aquatic, aqueous mouth… Swallowed us, whole and most divine. Our soul’s instantaneouslyintertwined! What entity, created divine, instant intimacy. An under the sea, divine, exotic gratification. 3/17/2024

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Date: 3/18/2024 11:58:00 AM
A very romantic and oceanic glory poem, dear Pangie. A grand penning. Bravo! xoxx
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Date: 3/19/2024 6:58:00 PM
The is an odd one. Would you love but I have to like it a lot for some reason I don’t know why.. Thank you for the wonderful compliments. Pangie xx
Date: 3/18/2024 7:10:00 AM
Dear Pangie, How beautifully you capture the allure and intensity of love, likening it to a midnight chimera beneath the sea. The imagery of passion's gates opening wide and souls intertwining instantly evokes a sense of divine intimacy. Pangie, what a mesmerizing journey through the depths of emotion and connection. A very enchanting sea fantasy. - Blessings, Daniel
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Date: 3/18/2024 10:33:00 AM
Good Day, Daniel.! Your comment delights my eyes and heart !I don’t suffer from vanity, neither do I have desire for constant affirmation, adoration or praise. That is the deadliest of dead ends. Long ago ,in a seminar in SF. I learned that ..I suffered for a thist for affirmation ..I had to learn that even if nobody acknowledged me, this was a call for me to learn that I have to “acknowledge myself first.” . Looking for appoval,..forget it. Look to approve of others..))) if online friends disappear that I know well, let them go! This was an experimental poem and much fun. Thanks for the thumbs up.. Hugs, Pangie xx
Date: 3/18/2024 5:13:00 AM
So cool. Your creativity knows no limits, Pangie.
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Date: 3/18/2024 9:33:00 AM
Andrea, i intend to stretch it to the limits in the daays and weeks ahead. Who knows what I will come up with! LOL Hugs, Pangie.xx
Date: 3/18/2024 3:35:00 AM
Love beneath the waves. So wonderfully written.
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Date: 3/18/2024 9:30:00 AM
Hello, Victor! How on point you are~ love beneath the seas! Mmmmm! I have a vivid imagination… Hugs, Pangie
Date: 3/17/2024 5:57:00 PM
a delightful poem, Pangie! I loved: "our souls instantly intertwined." I enjoyed the imagery in the first line midnight love chimera. Your poem did feel like a fantasy, so your title was perfect. Hope you're well...haven't heard from you in some time. Take care & have a great evening, hugs, Sara
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Date: 3/17/2024 6:26:00 PM
Well, Sara, i am not crawling on the floor yet nor om my deathbed. Thank heavens, This is an unusual write for me. No, not the romance, I really jumped out of the rhyme Zone. I just imagined how it would be for me. I, too limed the title. The image is unique..like the poem. Thank you for taking your time to read me and I haven’t been prey for a few days…just stuff going on around here, I am tired now though I’ve been up since long time ago I need to take a rest, but no, I’m not passing away dont think that please)))’ Pangie xx
Date: 3/17/2024 4:09:00 PM
A very beautiful poem. Very exotic and creative.
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Date: 3/17/2024 4:46:00 PM
Elena. Dig her pointed ears. Lol! It was a fun poem to pen. The chimera was written about in Greek sea mythology. I wanted to get off of “Rhyme Road” and take a dive into unknown waters that are unchartered It was fun. Freedom. Pangie xx
Date: 3/17/2024 3:40:00 PM
That next to last line so beautiful!
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Date: 3/17/2024 3:47:00 PM
Hi Kim! You have an eye for beauty! There are so many in your own creative, verses. Thank you, have a day of miracles….. Pangie xx

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