Turning the Table

To weddings Ann went alone perplexed
Her love life her aunties favorite subject
So she turned a bit juvenile
At a great uncles funeral 
And exclaimed to the Aunties “you’re next” !
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Allison Avatar
May 9, 2017 at 7:09 AM
You've had a really good try at the limerick form and the humour is great I hope my soup mail gave you some pointers on how to improve the flow of the poem:-) hugs Jan xx
Soper Avatar
May 9, 2017 at 7:43 AM
Yes the pointers definitely helped. Thanks for the assistance, going to make some adjustments.. Thanks again....
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