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Turning the Table

To weddings Ann went alone perplexed Her love life her aunties favorite subject So she turned a bit juvenile At a great uncles funeral And exclaimed to the Aunties “you’re next” !

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Date: 5/9/2017 7:09:00 AM
You've had a really good try at the limerick form and the humour is great I hope my soup mail gave you some pointers on how to improve the flow of the poem:-) hugs Jan xx
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Joseph Soper
Date: 5/9/2017 7:43:00 AM
Yes the pointers definitely helped. Thanks for the assistance, going to make some adjustments.. Thanks again....