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Turning the Table

To weddings Ann went alone perplexed
Her love life her aunties favorite subject
So she turned a bit juvenile
At a great uncles funeral 
And exclaimed to the Aunties “you’re next” !

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Jan Allison

Date: 5/9/2017 7:09:00 AM

You've had a really good try at the limerick form and the humour is great I hope my soup mail gave you some pointers on how to improve the flow of the poem:-) hugs Jan xx

Joseph Soper
Date: 5/9/2017 7:43:00 AM

Yes the pointers definitely helped. Thanks for the assistance, going to make some adjustments.. Thanks again....