Turning the Table

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have seen so many Limericks on here recently thought I would try my hand. First attempt at this style of writing, will take a few tries to get my groove on I think,.

This one feeels a little clunky and doesnt flow quite right, will have to make some adjustments me thinks...

To weddings Ann went alone perplexed Her love life her aunties favorite subject So she turned a bit juvenile At a great uncles funeral And exclaimed to the Aunties “you’re next” !

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JAN ALLISON

Date: 5/9/2017 7:09:00 AM

You've had a really good try at the limerick form and the humour is great I hope my soup mail gave you some pointers on how to improve the flow of the poem:-) hugs Jan xx

Joseph Soper
Date: 5/9/2017 7:43:00 AM

Yes the pointers definitely helped. Thanks for the assistance, going to make some adjustments.. Thanks again....