Michelle Faulkner Poet Enclosed Rhyme

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Turning Sun's Touch

Turning sun's touch realign and tilt
Languid brooks scarce compete with hardy
The breeze of ease reposing and tardy
As debutants of summer seem to wilt

Forests draped in glorious orange dress
Bestows blessings upon the autumn bride
Fancy June too fickle for October pride
Her harvest of bounty demands to impress

Sunsets richer, night loon serenade
Moon more crisp, crickets chirp brisk
Romancing in red is worth the risk
As waterfalls of leaves cascade

In this palette of color Mother Earth grants
The year closes on a gift of wonder
Living blaze before cold ices under
These painted weeks of Picasso, of Rembrandt-

9/5/18

For Dear Heart's "Enclosed Rhyme" contest

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Constance La France October 2, 2018 at 3:19 PM Congratulations on your win in my contest ~ Michelle Faulkner October 8, 2018 at 2:11 AM Thank you so much!

Susan Ashley October 1, 2018 at 7:10 PM Your poem is so exquisitely endowed in Autumn's rich atmosphere of sights, sounds and colors, Michelle. Stunning imagery and phrasing. Congratulations on your wonderful win.. ~Susan Michelle Faulkner October 8, 2018 at 2:11 AM Appreciate your kind comment, Susan-

Mike Gentile September 30, 2018 at 6:53 AM Congratulations as well to you Michelle, you night moon serenade is my favorite line xxoo Michelle Faulkner September 30, 2018 at 4:31 PM Thanks for the visit, Mike!

Connie Marcum Wong September 29, 2018 at 10:40 PM Congratulations on your wonderful win Michelle! : ) Michelle Faulkner September 29, 2018 at 10:57 PM Appreciate that, Connie!

Line Gauthier September 29, 2018 at 7:22 PM Congrats on your win, Michelle. Well penned. Michelle Faulkner September 29, 2018 at 10:57 PM Thank you, Line!

Gershon Wolf September 17, 2018 at 9:36 PM Wonderfully imaged; wonderfully penned. Simply excellent poesy, Michelle! ~ Gershon

Gershon Wolf September 17, 2018 at 9:36 PM Wonderfully imaged; wonderfully penned. Simply excellent poesy, Michelle! ~ Gershon Michelle Faulkner September 18, 2018 at 2:54 PM Thank you, here's hoping for a wonderful fall!

M. L. Kiser September 6, 2018 at 11:16 AM A fascinating read; beautifully penned; I really enjoyed this one. Michelle Faulkner September 6, 2018 at 2:14 PM Thank you again!

Heidi Sands September 6, 2018 at 7:26 AM This is beautiful. I enjoyed this today :) Michelle Faulkner September 6, 2018 at 2:15 PM So glad you like it, Heidi!

M. L. Kiser September 5, 2018 at 8:42 PM Beautiful imagery, flow and rhythm; it paints a marvelous canvas and I'm there...I just jumped right into that painting. Well done! Michelle Faulkner September 6, 2018 at 2:15 PM Thank you for your lovely comment!

Tom Cunningham September 5, 2018 at 3:21 PM Well written enclosed rhyme Michelle, love the imagery. Good luck. Tom Michelle Faulkner September 6, 2018 at 2:18 PM Thank you, appreciate it!

Caren Krutsinger September 5, 2018 at 1:26 PM "Bestows blessings upon the autumn bride Fancy June too fickle for October pride" what a beautiful imagery to explain so much about these back to back seasons, Michelle. You have SoupMail. Michelle Faulkner September 5, 2018 at 2:28 PM Thank you for the note, Caren, appreciate it (You have Soupmail too)