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Turning sun's touch realign and tilt
Languid brooks scarce compete with hardy
The breeze of ease reposing and tardy
As debutants of summer seem to wilt

Forests draped in glorious orange dress
Bestows blessings upon the autumn bride
Fancy June too fickle for October pride
Her harvest of bounty demands to impress

Sunsets richer, night loon serenade
Moon more crisp, crickets chirp brisk
Romancing in red is worth the risk
As waterfalls of leaves cascade

In this palette of color Mother Earth grants
The year closes on a gift of wonder
Living blaze before cold ices under
These painted weeks of Picasso, of Rembrandt-

9/5/18

For Dear Heart's "Enclosed Rhyme" contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 10/2/2018 3:19:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in my contest ~
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 10/8/2018 2:11:00 AM
Thank you so much!
Date: 10/1/2018 7:10:00 PM
Your poem is so exquisitely endowed in Autumn's rich atmosphere of sights, sounds and colors, Michelle. Stunning imagery and phrasing. Congratulations on your wonderful win.. ~Susan
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 10/8/2018 2:11:00 AM
Appreciate your kind comment, Susan-
Date: 9/30/2018 6:53:00 AM
Congratulations as well to you Michelle, you night moon serenade is my favorite line xxoo
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 9/30/2018 4:31:00 PM
Thanks for the visit, Mike!
Date: 9/29/2018 10:40:00 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful win Michelle! : )
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 9/29/2018 10:57:00 PM
Appreciate that, Connie!
Date: 9/29/2018 7:22:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Michelle. Well penned.
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 9/29/2018 10:57:00 PM
Thank you, Line!
Date: 9/17/2018 9:36:00 PM
Wonderfully imaged; wonderfully penned. Simply excellent poesy, Michelle! ~ Gershon
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 9/18/2018 2:54:00 PM
Thank you, here's hoping for a wonderful fall!
Date: 9/17/2018 9:36:00 PM
Wonderfully imaged; wonderfully penned. Simply excellent poesy, Michelle! ~ Gershon
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Date: 9/6/2018 11:16:00 AM
A fascinating read; beautifully penned; I really enjoyed this one.
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 9/6/2018 2:14:00 PM
Thank you again!
Date: 9/6/2018 7:26:00 AM
This is beautiful. I enjoyed this today :)
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 9/6/2018 2:15:00 PM
So glad you like it, Heidi!
Date: 9/5/2018 8:42:00 PM
Beautiful imagery, flow and rhythm; it paints a marvelous canvas and I'm there...I just jumped right into that painting. Well done!
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 9/6/2018 2:15:00 PM
Thank you for your lovely comment!
Date: 9/5/2018 3:21:00 PM
Well written enclosed rhyme Michelle, love the imagery. Good luck. Tom
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 9/6/2018 2:18:00 PM
Thank you, appreciate it!
Date: 9/5/2018 1:26:00 PM
"Bestows blessings upon the autumn bride Fancy June too fickle for October pride" what a beautiful imagery to explain so much about these back to back seasons, Michelle. You have SoupMail.
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 9/5/2018 2:28:00 PM
Thank you for the note, Caren, appreciate it (You have Soupmail too)

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