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Dark death did not break the bond with my dad, when I need his love I just turn back time; he stops his working when I come so sad, and on to the chair beside him I climb. For in this memory I am his- child, he dries my tears with a ragged shirt part; socks falling down- skirt hem ripped- dark hair wild, he whispers . . . life will get better dear heart. _______________________ March 27, 2023 Poetry/Rhyme/Turning Back Time Copyright Protected, ID 03-1534-401-27 All Rights Reserved, 2023, Constance La France

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Date: 3/27/2023 1:07:00 PM
Much enjoyed the endearing voice of your poem, Constance. Memories of the beloved dear to every heart.
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Constance La France
Date: 3/27/2023 1:47:00 PM
Vijay, thank you so much for the comment and compliment, blessings
Date: 3/27/2023 12:34:00 PM
WoW! Constance, You have penned such a touching and heartfelt memory. Our loved ones live on in our hearts and memories. A lovely entry for the contest. Best wishes in the contest. Have a great day-Alexis
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Date: 3/27/2023 12:44:00 PM
Alexis, thank you so much for the compliment and the comment, and the encouragement, blessings

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