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Turning Back Time

I will turn back the tattered pages of my life, to when I was a young girl and free of sorrow; I remember walking holding hands in the park, you and me father sitting on our park bench. It is still there- that place we talked for hours, the ducks and swans still swim over for a treat; but there is an emptiness in the park for me, since you left me so suddenly with no goodbye. So, I will remember you on that bench father, telling me a long story of your own childhood. ______________________________ September 26, 2018 Poetry/Verse/Turning Back Time Copyright Protected, ID 18-1064-926-01 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Written for the contest, Lines of Ten Sponsor, Silent One Second Place

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Date: 10/12/2018 8:18:00 AM
Thanks Eve, and Line for visiting with congratulations and a huge thank you to Silent for the contest and for my placement, appreciate ~
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Date: 10/11/2018 7:34:00 PM
Lovely memory, Dear Heart. Congrats on your well deserved podium finish.
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Date: 10/7/2018 5:42:00 PM
I enjoyed reading, Dear Heart, such a sad poem ...congratulations on your win. :)
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Date: 10/5/2018 6:25:00 AM
Sad, but beautiful memories... Congratulations on place in the contest..
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Date: 9/25/2018 11:23:00 PM
Hi Poetic Friends. My father taught me so much about life, nature, and handling my problems. He was a man full of quotes, and had one for every situation. Like the song says, I keep a part of him with me - he is always in my heart~
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