Turned Loose

Constrained, restricted hair in bun Gray hair flows like a high waterfall

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Sharon Winter

Date: 4/21/2010 10:02:00 AM

hi Sara. this is so visual and well written! wish I could go gray but think I would scare everyone - thank goodness for Clairol - lol. you are so kind to leave me comments on my work. want you to know how very much I appreciate it. you are so sweet and thoughtful. warmest thanks. love, shar xo

Lynette Chachere

Date: 4/2/2010 4:05:00 PM

I once grew a gray hair. but i was really stressed, thats why. i hope its not because im ageing. i would believe i have a long way to go. that would be scary if now.haha this poem kind of made me laugh. -Alway&Forever Lynette

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 4/2/2010 5:22:00 AM

Enjoyed mom, have a good day. We are going to the shooting match tomorrow.

Gert W. Knop

Date: 4/2/2010 4:30:00 AM

Yes for sure it does, Sara! Thank you for commenting Abandoned Houses! The problem here is that too many houses and flats are vacant as jobs in our area are rare and many younf folks move to the western part...Hope you'll be having nice Easter holidays....Gert

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/1/2010 9:28:00 PM

Wow, this reminds me of my grandmother's long, silver hair. As a child I used to marvel at the way it cascaded for several feet when she "turned loose" the bun. Thanks for the memories; great crystalline! Love, Carolyn

Charles Henderson

Date: 4/1/2010 6:34:00 PM

O I liked this one. Thanks for your comments on my poem. Charles