Turn a New Page

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Turn a new page and stand erect Stupor our enemy Animal instincts, now correct Choose love and empathy It is a slow process To rid mind of duress Let not earth life depress Get rid of rage Turn a new page 22-September-2021 Quietus

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Regina Mcintosh

Date: 9/22/2021 6:16:00 AM

So true. Valuable write. God bless you my friend. Love, Gina

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 9/22/2021 6:55:00 AM

Thanks, Regina!

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 9/22/2021 5:34:00 AM

My life's condition is atrocious because times come when I'm happy, others when I'm not.

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 9/22/2021 6:58:00 AM

Watch thoughts & emotions, moment to moment. Predicting outcomes (attachment/ identification with mind-body) is the origin of consciousness contracting impulses

Jenna Logan

Date: 9/22/2021 4:19:00 AM

I totally agree in turning the page. Living with anger is harmful as your wise words indicate.

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 9/22/2021 6:55:00 AM

Yes. Thank you, Jenna!