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Tunnel Vision

The world lay at his feet He never thought to look down His Creator smiled on him from above Preoccupied, he never lifted his eyes ~ He just looked straight ahead until he was stone cold dead

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Panagiota Romios

Date: 5/30/2021 11:03:00 AM

A FAv Pangie Xx

Gershon Wolf
Date: 5/30/2021 3:07:00 PM

Thank you so much, Pangie. A FAVE is always an honor for me. Hope you are well. Best wishes, Gershon

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 5/29/2021 12:33:00 PM

Well penned Gershon my friend - imagine being smiled upon by god, and your soul and heart and being is so preoccupied, you will never know. - SAD! HUGS AND BLESSINGS, JENNIFER.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 5/29/2021 9:06:00 PM

We gotta look up once in a while, you know!! Thanks, Jennifer. :) gw

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/29/2021 4:53:00 AM

Unfortunately some heads cannot swivel. Nicely said, dear Gerahon!

Gershon Wolf
Date: 5/29/2021 9:05:00 PM

Oh, to be an owl! ~ 360 degree Turnabout

L Milton Hankins

Date: 5/28/2021 7:53:00 PM

I'm afraid this is a song often sung, G.W. And so much of life we miss along the way because we are focused...so focused...on what???

Gershon Wolf
Date: 5/29/2021 8:56:00 PM

Great question. Lazer-focused on -- what?! Good to take that step back, at least once a day, eh?! :) gw

Alexis Y.

Date: 5/28/2021 5:53:00 PM

WoW! Gershon, What a well-written and deep write on tunnel vision. I found your final line to be very impactful. Well done-Alexis

Gershon Wolf
Date: 5/29/2021 8:55:00 PM

Glad you like it, Alexis. Here's to expansive vision and wide horizons ~ Gershon