Tunes From My Heart

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Zest oozes the delicate beauty of a bloom.  
Harvest love seeds from several heirlooms
Enjoy the harmonies of an ornate costume
Infusing every dazzling color with perfume. 
Unwrap her wrapper for summer to illume.
The rainbow of colors enchants the room. 
Sending me on a ride on a pure wave loom.
Keeps me energized until I start to plume. 
Sweep away fear and fury with the broom.


Written: November 05, 2022

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Sam Kauffman

Date: 1/3/2023 10:42:00 AM

A beautiful song of life indeed Lasaad! "Keep me energized," "sweep away fear," just two of your vibrant melody lines in the dance of life. Congratulations on your win with this delightful love song of life! Blessings to you for the new year!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/21/2022 3:00:00 AM

Congratulations on this winner in Brian's contest. Way to go. Sara

Vijay Pandit

Date: 11/6/2022 5:23:00 AM

Well done in this difficult to execute form my friend. Enjoyed the tunes from your heart.

Valsa George

Date: 11/5/2022 11:29:00 PM

A lovely poem with beautiful images which make the heart take flight and swing around ! Great rhyming too ! All the Best in the contest, dear friend !

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 11/5/2022 2:22:00 PM

Dancing can surely take away the gloom dear Sotto, do it often, :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/5/2022 1:24:00 PM

I enjoyed reading this one today. Reads like a good contender for the contest to me. Way to go. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page to let me know I placed in your contest. I appreciate the honor of being there. Sara