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An old friend for many years, my cane's ready for our walk. And yet, I linger a while, listening to two crows squawk. Hiking on the trail, I hear the distinct call of a quail. And watch the dust devils twirl as the weeping willows wail. Far off, rumbles of thunder warn a storm is on its way. And as I start to head home, charcoal clouds turn blue skies gray. Tumultuous raindrops fall as children splash ankle-deep. And yet, from my veranda, their laughter lulls me to sleep. (Quatrain) 5/16/2015

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Date: 3/1/2018 6:17:00 PM
I love your opening imagery "An old friend for many years my cane’s ready for our walk. And yet I linger a while listening to two crows squawk." A charming poem, Emile.
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Date: 3/1/2018 6:44:00 PM
Thank you so much Line, your visits are always most welcome. Emile.
Date: 5/17/2015 3:46:00 PM
WoW! What an interesting piece excellent work.
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Date: 5/17/2015 4:18:00 PM
Thanks Afolabi, I appreciate your support. Emile.
Date: 5/17/2015 8:20:00 AM
Wonderful piece! I also really like the photo.
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Date: 5/17/2015 11:49:00 AM
Thanks Richard, I greatly appreciate all of your continued support. Emile.
Date: 5/16/2015 10:24:00 PM
Emile, you have evoked such beautiful emotions here, the photo is the icing on the cake!
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Date: 5/17/2015 11:48:00 AM
Thanks Arthur, I greatly appreciate your continued support. Emile.
Date: 5/16/2015 6:00:00 PM
this is really nice, how you follow it through to hearing the kids lull you to sleep playing in the rain. Awesome!
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Date: 5/16/2015 9:52:00 PM
Thanks Andrea, I greatly appreciate all of your support. Emile.
Date: 5/16/2015 4:44:00 PM
Beautiful imagery, Emile; thunder and heavy rainfall are not enough to drown out the children's laughter. #7 // paul
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Date: 5/16/2015 9:53:00 PM
Thanks so much Paul, I appreciate all of your support. Emile.
Date: 5/16/2015 4:06:00 PM
Very nice imagery cultivated in to a nice poem. 7 indeed. Loved always, my lovely friend,bl
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Date: 5/16/2015 9:53:00 PM
Thanks BL, I appreciate your support. Emile.
Date: 5/16/2015 1:47:00 PM
So beautifully described I can picture this so clearly in my mind, the thunder, the storm, the rain and everything else. Wonderful write. 7
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Date: 5/16/2015 9:54:00 PM
Thanks Nandita, I greatly appreciate all of your continued support. Emile.
Date: 5/16/2015 12:51:00 PM
The imagery isso beautiful Emile, I was with you every step of the journey:-) Hugs Jan xx 7 xx
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Date: 5/16/2015 9:54:00 PM
Thanks Jan, I greatly appreciate all of your support. Emile.

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