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Tulips

Spiral carved spheres on long green stems brimming with redness Fiery egos afloat in spring air Layered petal enclosures, soft cups, paper thin, Leaves tapered upward in brisk solidarity Beneath the sun, unapologetic and fierce Rebel flowers, masters of attention Bulbs cradled in mottled ground To set the spring in motion, when sight is subdued by a stage of blooms escape hatch from burdens worldly from whatever drags us into bleakness Unblemished red tulips, clumped together, a shrine the ruddiness of momentary that moves your soul when you are silent

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Date: 10/28/2023 9:18:00 PM
My favorite line which is fun to 'see' as I read, "Layered petal enclosures, soft cups, paper thin" standing at attention. Perfect. I can almost feel them. Their colors are alarming, they are fun to plant in patterns. " Rebel flowers" great line!! Be brave of those bulb stealing squirrels. What a nice poem.
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 10/28/2023 9:25:00 PM
Thank you, Marikate, for your supportive comments that highlight some of the poem's lines. So true. Squirrels ravage tulip bulbs. Be well. With appreciation, Brian
Date: 4/7/2021 6:49:00 AM
This is truly amazing my friend....Congrats on your win :)
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 4/7/2021 12:43:00 PM
Hello Carol, Very kind of you to leave such an affirming note. You made my day. I re wrote Tulips about 3 times due to an NA in an earlier contest. Thank you again. Best wishes, Brian
Date: 5/22/2020 6:54:00 AM
TULIPS are "layered petal [s] ... soft cups, paper thin, " but thanks for "rebel flowers." Brian, are u published? U ough to be; the last 3 lines got an AWARD - such as it is, shalom of Jesus - from me.
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 5/22/2020 8:13:00 AM
Thank you Anil. You are sensitive to some of the spiritual allusions I am trying to gently nudge. Your reading of my Tamaracks poem with again the same intention was most insightful. Your comments are always appreciated. Best wishes Brian (ps no journal publication since the late 90's)

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