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Tuesday Evening

The barbershop is buzzing; My guy is running late. At home, my dinner’s waiting; I am hungry, which I hate. The traffic out the window Zips by quickly, heading home. I sit and watch the city breathe And write my daily poem.

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Date: 9/7/2019 7:06:00 AM
Tuesday Afternoon has faded into night. ilene can be found thinking of something new to write. A simple recollection of all the daily do's. A pleasant prose of phrasing to share the daily news.
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Date: 9/4/2019 7:02:00 PM
'The city breathe' -- intriguing... And as a visitor from the farm known as Chicago, I could only hear NYC wheeze. (All those buses, construction, and noise 24/7). ~ Hick from French Lick
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Date: 9/4/2019 7:36:00 AM
And I am happy you did. : ) Nice one Ilene. Uh oh, the captcha to validate my comment is PUB...you mentioned barbershop, you don't think... : )
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Date: 9/3/2019 11:50:00 PM
Cute one... I wish I can write one every day...
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Date: 9/3/2019 10:35:00 PM
Good one, Ilene....lets us see a moment in your day. Thank you.
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Date: 9/3/2019 7:41:00 PM
Hope you didn't have to wait too long to get your meal:-) hugs Jan xx
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