Tsunami Survivors Share Love (Cowritten With James Fraser)

My Carolyn and I, on Plymouth Hoe we stand
To leave this shire of Devon, to far distant lands
Our desire to leave, and this change in our lives
There's a future out there, for me and my new wife
As I look down on the harbour, at these ships of grand
To be honoured and trusted, my voyage of command
Tomorrow we sail, to the South Seas and beyond
My crew and I, in dutiful naval respond

     Even before we set sail, a hurricane did brew
     At first we met calm seas, if only we knew
     For as we headed south, Atlantic waters churned
     Yet still my Highlander's passion in my heart burned
     A tsunami grew on the eastern horizon
     Would we reach our Caribbean island?
     The huge water mass approached and toppled our ship
     But James' strong arms ensured that we remained adrift
                                                                                            
Tossed and battered, in the midst of her rage
Spewed onto the shore, our bodies and sands engage
Weathered and ashen, we arise in the sun
Deserted and beached, a new day has begun
We view our surrounds, in search of a haven
To collect our thoughts, now in survival craving
It's been many weeks, as we have formed an alliance
Our deserted island called home, in total compliance

     A thatched roof he has crafted, shelter from the storms
     On this palm-filled beach, two survivors are born
     My sweet Highlander climbs and shakes coconuts free 
     He forages through jungles, brings meat to me
     I crafted a spear and have caught many a fish
     Whatever I cook, he says it's his favorite dish
     When falling sun brings colorful skies, we cuddle
     We embrace where nature's other creatures huddle

It's been many many years, on this island of ours
Living with nature, our most wonderful neighbours
We awoke one morning, to see a ship offshore
I turned to my Carolyn, with emotions galore
Do we stay here in paradise, or leave for new lands
It's what we intended, being deserted was not planned
Our signals in tune, we declare to prepare
What we have learnt here, the world needs to share
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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U.D Palawon  Avatar
February 7, 2017 at 1:20 AM
Adventure, though came out after disaster. Strong people make it wherever they are. Hard work and being practical do make life better!Congrats it's been featured. GL. :)l
Poet Avatar
January 19, 2011 at 7:11 AM
Beautiful write.Was it the Boxing day tsunami which hit India also?-kashinath
Knop Avatar
October 7, 2009 at 5:00 PM
I'm very impressed of your lines, Carolyn. Just had an email from a friend of mine living on Efate (Vanuatu). They had an earthquake of 7.8 Richer Scale and a Tsunami-warnig was given. I have been livin long enough in that area and can feel with the people there. Keep your good writing! Love, Gert
Peranteau Avatar
October 1, 2009 at 7:40 AM
Carolyn,.. I'm sure you've heard of the latest tradgic event. I knew I read a beautiful soft comfort some where once,..and I found it,..right here,..from you and Mr. Fraser. Would you two kind folks please do it again? Bravo once again for this one ! james
Gass Avatar
September 16, 2009 at 8:00 AM
I was captivated by this beautifully written story/poem. What an amazing collaboration! Smooth, flowing rhyme and brilliant images abound in such touching sentiment. Excellent work, Carolyn and James! Love, Robin
Smith-Johnsen Avatar
August 24, 2009 at 1:58 PM
(la,la,la,) Carolyn and James, sitting by the Sea!!! K-i-s-s-i-n-g (la,la,la) Okay you two, I just couldn't help myself... The POEM made me do it. LOL It's just that it is so romantic and the two of you together have such great imaginations. Your writing styles are similar and any differences work to compliment one another. (Married this time... Huh, James... just kidding LOL) You know, there's a consensus here. You two simply must write a book together. I get the 3rd copy. Love you, Dane
Peranteau Avatar
August 21, 2009 at 5:58 PM
Carolyn and James,....this write is so wonderful,..dreamy,..and the declaration to share is wonderful,..not only in the last two lines, but through out this poem ! Bravo to you both ! james
Freeman Avatar
August 15, 2009 at 12:16 PM
A brilliant performance in this~Co-authored (flim) Carolyn, lol, God bless, Moses
Knop Avatar
August 15, 2009 at 10:36 AM
I really enjoyed reading this, Calolyn! Having lived on some South Sea Islands, I felt just the same. Thanks for your comment on "The Beggar". Love, Gert
Wilson Avatar
August 15, 2009 at 2:11 AM
Wow Caroline & James I agree with Barbara its like reading a book we are all in the story with you. Great read. God Bless. Leon
Gorelick Avatar
August 14, 2009 at 5:23 PM
You two have got it "going on"..Its like reading a book..page turner. You two should think about that..co-author a book. Many late night revisions? smile. No I havent heard a word.I did talk with Ruben and he also thought the poem was a cry for help. Wait..its hard. Love, BG
Chircop Avatar
August 14, 2009 at 4:32 PM
No Tsunami can drown the depths of feelings and emotions-survivors forever more--awesome-you two are so good--charma
Ball Avatar
August 14, 2009 at 3:17 PM
Loved it because of the message and myself I have the gift of rhyme, you are very very good, So keep up the excellent wok, Look forward to reading more' Robert Ball
Fraser Avatar
August 14, 2009 at 3:13 PM
Carolyn, thank you so much for this wonderful opportunity to share our similar thoughts again. We do have a knack for co-writing and this Highlander is over the moon for being involved with such a super writer and poet as yourself, lots of love James,xx
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