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Trying For the Ring

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For the 'Lipogram' Poetry Contest of Emile Pinet

PLEASE, IF ANYONE SPOTS LETTER A IN THIS POEM, LET ME KNOW.

I READ IT OVER AND OVER, BUT IT'S STILL POSSIBLE THERE IS AN "A" I'M NOT SEEING!

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My sweetie, oh how I need you. On my mind you ever linger. Believe me. My love is so true. One ring should be on my finger! This ring would bring me such delight. My sweetie, oh how I need you. Come to me soon – this very night. Come or I will feel very blue. You know my desires; yes you do! Come quickly, love, to my side. My sweetie, oh how I need you. You deserve some wonderful bride! Don’t you desire me for your wife? I do believe you need me too. Honey, you need me in your life. My sweetie, oh how I need you.

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Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 10/30/2023 3:51:00 PM

A lilting little romantic tidbit this, Andrea. I love it! Congratulations! :)

Emile Pinet

Date: 10/30/2023 12:22:00 PM

Congratulations Andrea! Your amazing romantic poem "Sunset", has earned you a distinguished place in my poetry contest. I was very strict, but your poem rose to the winner's circle. Very well done my friend, Emile.

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 10/31/2023 10:19:00 AM

Thanks so much, Emile.

Anisha Dutta

Date: 10/28/2023 8:34:00 PM

Lovely. You will win Top as usual. Have Great Days

Timothy Ray

Date: 10/28/2023 6:26:00 PM

i have seen no better reason why i never try these other forms....i don't have a talent such as you have.... a beautiful execution of the aching heart....

Silent One

Date: 10/28/2023 2:54:00 AM

You did this so well, looks like a difficult form and I did not spot the letter A.. well done Andrea.. but your name is the letter A at the end.. lol.. just kidding.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 10/28/2023 2:42:00 AM

A romantic plea for everlasting love. I never used this form. Still you did well. Blessings.

Ink Empress

Date: 10/27/2023 10:17:00 PM

Awwn this is so beautiful and so touching. Ah i want to try this challenge. Hah! I dont see any “a” in your poem .. so clever! Ive never tried lipogram. This sounds interesting and challenging to do. Would be fun. You’ve nailed it as always my beautiful soul! Goodluck for the contest

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/27/2023 8:54:00 PM

Hope she gets the ring, moreso the commitment and love!

Karen Jones

Date: 10/27/2023 5:58:00 PM

This is romantic and very passionate. I did not see any A's.

Richard D Seal

Date: 10/27/2023 5:36:00 PM

You’re not getting an ‘A’ from me for this effort Petal but it’s still a great write. Take care, Richard