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Truth Serum

I sip and I sip As rhyme drips from my lips I shoot from the hip With inane useless quips My pen is the arrow That points at the page The ink is the poison That's spreading my rage It has no indifference And writes with disdain About how I feel Of this world gone insane But also it speaks Of love and desire And feelings within That burn with a fire To have and to hold The things that amaze The pleasure that comes From one simple gaze The sun in the morning The moon in the night The song of the sparrow The Earthly delights And sometimes it brings To front something more Like pain of a sadness Or joy of amore The ink of my pen Is the blood of my script Recording my life From my birth to my crypt Rockman

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 2/5/2012 3:08:00 AM
I am coming back to this one, tho it looks as if I did not place some luv in a comment form before~ This is nice,,,,many a friend noted X-tacy as truth serum back in the day! Cool ass write man!
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Date: 1/26/2012 7:44:00 AM
Hi Rockman -- You've got it all in here with this poisoned pen. I love the way you've summed it up. kathy
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Date: 1/22/2012 10:08:00 PM
This is a great descriptive write with some good rhyming. Just correct a couple of spelling errors: 10th line, "disdane" is correctly spelled "disdain". 15th line, "whithin" is spelled "within". Everything else looks great.
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Rockman Pritts
Date: 1/22/2012 11:27:00 PM
Thanks for the keen eye. Sometimes I drink when I write so I appreciate the fellowship of others to help me stay on the right track.
Date: 1/22/2012 10:22:00 AM
This was a pleasant poem Rockman,I like it alot. - oxox love Anne-Lise
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Date: 1/22/2012 8:35:00 AM
I loved reading this poem. "The ink of my pen / Is the blood of my script" - Such a powerful line that would resonate with any writer. Your title is also perfect and really caught my attention. Thanks for sharing!
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Date: 1/22/2012 10:15:00 AM
Thanks Heather. I try to be inventive with the title for just that reason. After all, it is the first line that you read. Rockman :-)
Date: 1/22/2012 3:42:00 AM
Great rhyme. Love it from begining to end. Thanks for sharing.
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