Truth Is

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Written: September 02, 2023 ______________________________________________________________ In the tapestry of life, there are times When fragments of destiny weave their rhymes Pieces of sorrow, pieces of bliss Each one a thread, a tale to reminisce Someone who is lost, someone who is found A broken soul, wandering around Finds its way into my world, my core A connection was formed forevermore. In the tapestry of life, there are times When shattered bits fit, such idyllic chimes The cracks and fractures seem to align. Creating a mosaic is divine. Each broken piece has a story to spell. Of triumphs and struggles, heaven and hell They intertwine, they mend, and they heal. Transforming wounds into strength is surreal. I am forever changed by these broken bits. They teach me lessons, and they pull me fit. Into a tapestry, vibrant and bold. Where scars blend with beauty, untold In the tapestry of life, there are times When someone is lost, Finds its way into my heart, sublime The hourly benevolence, at any cost. And those shattered bits find their place. They cram the gaps with love and grace. The anguish and suffering fade away. Replaced by strength and a brighter day. In the tapestry of life, there are times When brokenness finds its way into my heart And those shattered bits fit together perfectly. Creating a masterpiece, a craft of art I am forever changed by these broken souls. They show that beauty can arise from the darkest holes. They teach me to embrace imperfection. And find strength in vulnerability reflection. In the tapestry of life, there are times When fragments of destiny intertwine With the threads of my own existence And together, they create resilience. A tapestry of life, woven with care Each thread is a reminder that we all have a share So let us embrace the brokenness we find. For it is in those shattered bits that we are refined.

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Speaks Volumes

Date: 9/2/2023 11:33:00 PM

We either take what befalls us and let it improve us, or allow it to attempt to destroy us. Either way, bitter or better it all ends up in the mix of life. Your analogy or a tapestry's woven threads, is superb my friend.

David Kavanagh

Date: 9/2/2023 2:25:00 PM

Truth is really out there in bits and pieces Lasaad, putting it back together through time and space, not so easy is it! But poets can bring imperfections back together and create a masterpiece of sorts, science says the relative order we see, is actually entropy slowed down, I’m not sure though, I believe we have more control over entropy than we actually understand, and that is what your poem is telling us here, an outstanding piece and a Fave for me, cheers David

David Kavanagh
Date: 9/3/2023 3:34:00 AM

I ponder will universal dark energy actually destroy entropy, when we learn how to observe it?

Sotto Poet
Date: 9/2/2023 3:19:00 PM

David, your words were truly eloquent, and I want to express my immense gratitude for your profound and thought-provoking perspective. It is undeniable that we possess a remarkable ability to influence the ever-increasing thermodynamic entropy through our actions. However, it is important to acknowledge that this entropy cannot be tamed universally. Yet, in our pursuit to combat this natural tendency, we have devised machines that tirelessly work to reverse the flow of entropy, permeating every corner of our existence.

Ink Empress

Date: 9/2/2023 11:36:00 AM

I love the rhymes and refrains used here. Absolutely stunning and as always this flows with such profound wisdom: those broken bits and pieces of our life, they are all lessons, and with a mindset like that we truly heal and grow: not always do we think this way as u do, but to let go i think like you’ve said in the tapestry of life we should believe there are various shades of everything, every thread a reminder.. loved this

Sotto Poet
Date: 9/2/2023 3:23:00 PM

Ink, your words are truly eloquent and I am grateful for your deep understanding. It is remarkable how even the seemingly insignificant parts of our lives can hold valuable lessons. By embracing this mindset, we not only heal but also flourish and evolve. It is fascinating to observe the multifaceted nature around us, as each shade and variation serves as a reminder of our origins and personal growth.