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Oh, soundless stars like a solid-looking, fragrant brook. I'm standing there, before the sunset, and covering the golden chains of the stars with beaming kisses, l like a fated chrysanthemum; enshrining an untamed piercing forest.

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Date: 1/19/2025 9:45:00 AM
Beautiful scene you've created Mu. Love the contrast of an old, perhaps semi dilapidated house with the beauty of the cosmos and us somewhere in between
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Mulu Magdalinos
Date: 1/19/2025 10:50:00 PM
Thank you, Tom. Have a nice week , Mulu.

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