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Truth Does Not Deceive

sighing crying dying lying quickened breaths are sighing, eyes crying our love is dying through your lying

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Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 8/8/2019 12:06:00 PM

The problem with someone that tells lies - unfortunately we have one in the family, they forget their past lies and tell us the same story with totally different variations and eventually start belieivng that their lies are the truth! Great poem - clever tyburn. Hugs, Jennifer.

Sandra Adams
Date: 8/8/2019 12:14:00 PM

i think we all know of people like this, sadly....kind of like the boy who cried wolf too many times, eventually you stop believing anything they say.... thank you :) hugs

John Gondolf

Date: 8/8/2019 9:44:00 AM

Nicely done, Sandy, you make this form look so easy. All my best. Hugs, John

Sandra Adams
Date: 8/8/2019 9:49:00 AM

it really is an easy form John, the hardest part is finding words that rhyme in your frame of poetic thought! :)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 8/8/2019 9:41:00 AM

Looks like you've quickly gotten the hang of these tyburns, Sandra. This one certainly packs a punch! :) gw

Sandra Adams
Date: 8/8/2019 9:48:00 AM

thank you was experimenting to see if this style could pack a punch.... :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/7/2019 1:51:00 PM

- The smallest things can lead to bigger and bigger lies ... yes, it destroys love - Even if the truth hurts ... we can move on - Great written, Sandra :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sandra Adams
Date: 8/7/2019 2:03:00 PM

i never understood why people feel the need to lie, even if the truth wouldn't hurt anyone...i know of people that only know how to lie about everything in life, their past jobs, their schooling, vacations...but why?... hugs :)