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Palindrome Poetry Contest Sponsored by Joseph May 02/23/26

Truth Bee Told


Did Hannah see bees? Hannah did
They’re chasing her, she can’t get rid Bees don’t give a damn Mad? Am I madam In swimming pool she dived and hid
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April 25, 2026 at 10:29 AM
But Hannah wasn't quick enough, those bees caught her in the buff, what she didn't know, was her bum was on show, and those bees do like a bit of rough.
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March 19, 2026 at 10:32 AM
Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful "Truth Bee Told" write again. I love this cute picture. Enjoy your wonderful win writing away..............
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March 18, 2026 at 5:54 AM
Congrats to Jan. Very well-done. She can wash off whatever the bees are attracted to.
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March 17, 2026 at 4:43 PM
Very nicely penned Jan. Congrats on your win
Dietrich Avatar
March 17, 2026 at 9:22 AM
Back with congrats. Yours was masterfully crafted
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February 27, 2026 at 8:29 PM
A cute and nice job with this!
Flood Avatar
February 25, 2026 at 4:25 PM
Nicely and cleverly done, Jan. I doubt I’d have even attempted this contest… it’d make my brain hurt!
Horne Avatar
February 25, 2026 at 12:53 PM
LOL, oh,very clever - tricky one to write, I bet! Well done
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February 24, 2026 at 7:12 PM
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February 24, 2026 at 7:14 PM
Very clever Blessings Douglas xx
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February 24, 2026 at 3:17 PM
Aha. You rose to the occasion, as Ilene aptly stated. Great job, Jan
Bauer Avatar
February 24, 2026 at 12:21 PM
you've definitely risen to the challenge, jan! best of luck in the contest - i enjoyed!
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February 24, 2026 at 9:06 AM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful "Truth Bee Told" write. Love your fun ending. Great/Cute Picture... "Good Luck" I did, "Hannah Meets Up With Bees and Blue Cheese, While Estelle Meets Up With John." Have a fun day writing away............
Brotherton Avatar
February 23, 2026 at 5:43 PM
A delightful limerick my friend.
Kendrick Avatar
February 23, 2026 at 4:31 PM
Good one. Reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. I like the humor. Sara K
Sheehan Avatar
February 23, 2026 at 3:07 PM
Nice limerick. Very humorous and real. Good luck in contest. Enjoyed.
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February 23, 2026 at 2:33 PM
Haha I did that once, but it was hornets and the swimming pool was a river lol you've done great with this one Jan - I was completely stuck when I attempted it :)
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February 23, 2026 at 2:37 PM
Thanks for dropping by Laurentine, it is quite a challenge weave the required lines in and to get the poem to make sense:-) hugs Jan xx
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