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mid afternoon the in-between time it's quiet and i can think i can write or i can read i can indulge in silence bathe in soft background music revel in the luxury of quietude, of solitude breathe in the essence of my own thoughts get lost in the peacefulness in the hazy feeling of not belonging of feeling disconnected of, for a while, being an outsider and feeling free AP: Honorable Mention 2024 Posted on September 16, 2024

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 9/18/2024 7:58:00 PM

So resonant, esp. for a retired gent like me... I can take a deep breath and just inhale what you've written! Only one problem: All this reveling in solitude can interfere with my daily afternoon nap! :) gw

Line Gauthier
Date: 9/20/2024 5:26:00 AM

Well, we would never want to interfere with a good regimen of naps now, would we?