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TRUTH ABOUT FOREVER

Time and fate must have connive as they 
Remembered: You and I..
Unforgettable are your shining blue eyes,
They are more beautiful than any stars. 
Heartbeats then spring in swings of summer blooms.

Accident, they said it before,
But I believe, our rendezvous: a tiger lily style.
Opposite we are, yet our chemistry a perfect mix.
Up down to cold fire situations, 
These differences brought about strengths.

Firework feelings fish to
Oceanic tides as you and me come close in rhyme.
Reasons, a candle lighted dinner of bridge and grudge,
Enveloping us both in warmer lights.
Verdict of love is a truth about forever risk.
Encountering solitary hearts to thrive
Round sick health raptures stroking eternal love.

© OLIVE ELOISA GUILLERMO
9:33pm
October 10, 2014

Sponsor	Regina Riddle
Contest Name	Romantic Acrostic 
placed 2nd, to God be the glory.. :)

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Date: 10/11/2014 3:40:00 AM
Congratulations, Olive! You provide much insight into the mating game in this acrostic. Very well composed and my favorite line is: "Verdict of love is a truth about forever risk." This is a fact, though it's hard to face sometimes. Should we? Shouldn't we? Perhaps a balance to vulnerability can be found. Love, Carolyn
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 10/11/2014 11:20:00 AM
indeed, we must aim for balance always.. :) it's hard but with God's help.. His enduring help we can.. :) thanks much for the generous comments.. and like you that;s my favorite line.
Date: 10/10/2014 5:29:00 PM
Gorgeous Olive. You have penned a lovely Acrostic. Hugs...
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 10/10/2014 9:27:00 PM
thanks much MArk.. :D! God bless you..
Date: 10/9/2014 12:22:00 PM
Mega congrats on your win Olive, smiles 4U, James :)
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 10/10/2014 3:55:00 AM
thanks much mr. JAmes.. :D!
Date: 10/9/2014 6:30:00 AM
Acrostic with lovely imagery, congrats on the win, Olive
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 10/10/2014 3:53:00 AM
thanks much Dr. Ram.. :) I appreciate it.. :D
Date: 10/8/2014 8:03:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this impressive poem.
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 10/10/2014 3:49:00 AM
thanks much MAurice.. :D
Date: 10/8/2014 6:04:00 PM
Congratulations on a great win. Love, Joyce
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 10/10/2014 3:48:00 AM
anks so much JOyce.. :) I appreciate your kind remarks.. :D
Date: 10/8/2014 3:59:00 PM
This is such a beautiful acrostic, Olive_eloi. Love how it ends by reaching eternal love. Congratulations on another high placing in the contest. hugs // paul
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 10/9/2014 10:11:00 PM
thanks much PAul.. :D! come come popcorn this time plus a movie.. :D! :P
Date: 10/8/2014 3:51:00 PM
this has some lovely imagery in it, Olive. Congrats on an awesome win!
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 10/9/2014 10:11:00 PM
thanks much Andrea.. :)! and so yours is.. :D!! love how you incorporated the months in your poem!!!.. :D by those months you let me view and remember scenes visible on those months.
Date: 10/8/2014 12:40:00 PM
Olive you are such a great poet and this poem once again shows your lovely talent. Congratulations on your win.
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 10/9/2014 10:09:00 PM
thanks much Brenda.. :) I appreciate your comment. :D
Date: 10/8/2014 10:52:00 AM
dropping back with my congratulations Olive :-) hugs Jan xx
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 10/9/2014 10:08:00 PM
thanks sweet Jan.. :D love it.. :D!
Date: 10/8/2014 7:03:00 AM
brilliantly crafted piece love how you painted this olive
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 10/9/2014 10:34:00 AM
thanks much Liam as you do too to your poems.. :)
Date: 10/7/2014 9:45:00 PM
A fantastic intriguing entry for the contest Olive. It is sure to receive top honors!
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Date: 10/9/2014 3:38:00 AM
thanks much COnnie.. :) I appreciate your generous comment.. :D
Date: 10/7/2014 11:27:00 AM
incredible acrostic Olive this will do very well in the contest:-) Its a 7 from me Hugs jan xx
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 10/8/2014 8:08:00 AM
Thanks much.sweet Jan... :) God bless you.. :D
Date: 10/7/2014 10:16:00 AM
Forever beautiful!!
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 10/7/2014 7:06:00 PM
thanks much Buddy Art.. :D!