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Truth About Forever

Time and fate must have connive as they 
Remembered: You and I..
Unforgettable are your shining blue eyes,
They are more beautiful than any stars. 
Heartbeats then spring in swings of summer blooms.

Accident, they said it before,
But I believe, our rendezvous: a tiger lily style.
Opposite we are, yet our chemistry a perfect mix.
Up down to cold fire situations, 
These differences brought about strengths.

Firework feelings fish to
Oceanic tides as you and me come close in rhyme.
Reasons, a candle lighted dinner of bridge and grudge,
Enveloping us both in warmer lights.
Verdict of love is a truth about forever risk.
Encountering solitary hearts to thrive
Round sick health raptures stroking eternal love.

© OLIVE ELOISA GUILLERMO
9:33pm
October 10, 2014

Sponsor	Regina Riddle
Contest Name	Romantic Acrostic 
placed 2nd, to God be the glory.. :)

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Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 10/11/2014 3:40:00 AM

Congratulations, Olive! You provide much insight into the mating game in this acrostic. Very well composed and my favorite line is: "Verdict of love is a truth about forever risk." This is a fact, though it's hard to face sometimes. Should we? Shouldn't we? Perhaps a balance to vulnerability can be found. Love, Carolyn

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 10/11/2014 11:20:00 AM

indeed, we must aim for balance always.. :) it's hard but with God's help.. His enduring help we can.. :) thanks much for the generous comments.. and like you that;s my favorite line.

Mark Trichet

Date: 10/10/2014 5:29:00 PM

Gorgeous Olive. You have penned a lovely Acrostic. Hugs...

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 10/10/2014 9:27:00 PM

thanks much MArk.. :D! God bless you..

James Fraser

Date: 10/9/2014 12:22:00 PM

Mega congrats on your win Olive, smiles 4U, James :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 10/10/2014 3:55:00 AM

thanks much mr. JAmes.. :D!

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 10/9/2014 6:30:00 AM

Acrostic with lovely imagery, congrats on the win, Olive

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 10/10/2014 3:53:00 AM

thanks much Dr. Ram.. :) I appreciate it.. :D

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 10/8/2014 8:03:00 PM

Congratulations on your win with this impressive poem.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 10/10/2014 3:49:00 AM

thanks much MAurice.. :D

Joyce Johnson

Date: 10/8/2014 6:04:00 PM

Congratulations on a great win. Love, Joyce

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 10/10/2014 3:48:00 AM

anks so much JOyce.. :) I appreciate your kind remarks.. :D

Paul Callus

Date: 10/8/2014 3:59:00 PM

This is such a beautiful acrostic, Olive_eloi. Love how it ends by reaching eternal love. Congratulations on another high placing in the contest. hugs // paul

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 10/9/2014 10:11:00 PM

thanks much PAul.. :D! come come popcorn this time plus a movie.. :D! :P

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/8/2014 3:51:00 PM

this has some lovely imagery in it, Olive. Congrats on an awesome win!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 10/9/2014 10:11:00 PM

thanks much Andrea.. :)! and so yours is.. :D!! love how you incorporated the months in your poem!!!.. :D by those months you let me view and remember scenes visible on those months.