Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Poet Acrostic

Truth About Forever

Time and fate must have connive as they 
Remembered: You and I..
Unforgettable are your shining blue eyes,
They are more beautiful than any stars. 
Heartbeats then spring in swings of summer blooms.

Accident, they said it before,
But I believe, our rendezvous: a tiger lily style.
Opposite we are, yet our chemistry a perfect mix.
Up down to cold fire situations, 
These differences brought about strengths.

Firework feelings fish to
Oceanic tides as you and me come close in rhyme.
Reasons, a candle lighted dinner of bridge and grudge,
Enveloping us both in warmer lights.
Verdict of love is a truth about forever risk.
Encountering solitary hearts to thrive
Round sick health raptures stroking eternal love.

© OLIVE ELOISA GUILLERMO
9:33pm
October 10, 2014

Sponsor	Regina Riddle
Contest Name	Romantic Acrostic 
placed 2nd, to God be the glory.. :)

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Carolyn Devonshire October 11, 2014 at 3:40 AM Congratulations, Olive! You provide much insight into the mating game in this acrostic. Very well composed and my favorite line is: "Verdict of love is a truth about forever risk." This is a fact, though it's hard to face sometimes. Should we? Shouldn't we? Perhaps a balance to vulnerability can be found. Love, Carolyn Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser October 11, 2014 at 11:20 AM indeed, we must aim for balance always.. :) it's hard but with God's help.. His enduring help we can.. :) thanks much for the generous comments.. and like you that;s my favorite line.

Mark Trichet October 10, 2014 at 5:29 PM Gorgeous Olive. You have penned a lovely Acrostic. Hugs... Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser October 10, 2014 at 9:27 PM thanks much MArk.. :D! God bless you..

James Fraser October 9, 2014 at 12:22 PM Mega congrats on your win Olive, smiles 4U, James :) Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser October 10, 2014 at 3:55 AM thanks much mr. JAmes.. :D!

Dr.Ram Mehta October 9, 2014 at 6:30 AM Acrostic with lovely imagery, congrats on the win, Olive Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser October 10, 2014 at 3:53 AM thanks much Dr. Ram.. :) I appreciate it.. :D

Maurice Yvonne October 8, 2014 at 8:03 PM Congratulations on your win with this impressive poem. Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser October 10, 2014 at 3:49 AM thanks much MAurice.. :D

Joyce Johnson October 8, 2014 at 6:04 PM Congratulations on a great win. Love, Joyce Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser October 10, 2014 at 3:48 AM anks so much JOyce.. :) I appreciate your kind remarks.. :D

Paul Callus October 8, 2014 at 3:59 PM This is such a beautiful acrostic, Olive_eloi. Love how it ends by reaching eternal love. Congratulations on another high placing in the contest. hugs // paul Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser October 9, 2014 at 10:11 PM thanks much PAul.. :D! come come popcorn this time plus a movie.. :D! :P

Andrea Dietrich October 8, 2014 at 3:51 PM this has some lovely imagery in it, Olive. Congrats on an awesome win! Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser October 9, 2014 at 10:11 PM thanks much Andrea.. :)! and so yours is.. :D!! love how you incorporated the months in your poem!!!.. :D by those months you let me view and remember scenes visible on those months.

Brenda Meier-Hans October 8, 2014 at 12:40 PM Olive you are such a great poet and this poem once again shows your lovely talent. Congratulations on your win. Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser October 9, 2014 at 10:09 PM thanks much Brenda.. :) I appreciate your comment. :D

Jan Allison October 8, 2014 at 10:52 AM dropping back with my congratulations Olive :-) hugs Jan xx Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser October 9, 2014 at 10:08 PM thanks sweet Jan.. :D love it.. :D!

Liam Mcdaid October 8, 2014 at 7:03 AM brilliantly crafted piece love how you painted this olive Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser October 9, 2014 at 10:34 AM thanks much Liam as you do too to your poems.. :)

Connie Marcum Wong October 7, 2014 at 9:45 PM A fantastic intriguing entry for the contest Olive. It is sure to receive top honors! Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser October 9, 2014 at 3:38 AM thanks much COnnie.. :) I appreciate your generous comment.. :D

Jan Allison October 7, 2014 at 11:27 AM incredible acrostic Olive this will do very well in the contest:-) Its a 7 from me Hugs jan xx Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser October 8, 2014 at 8:08 AM Thanks much.sweet Jan... :) God bless you.. :D

Arthur Vaso October 7, 2014 at 10:16 AM Forever beautiful!! Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser October 7, 2014 at 7:06 PM thanks much Buddy Art.. :D!