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When ones truth becomes distorted, letting outside influences mold our thoughts and actions, we lose ourselves in the abyss of no return.

Truth lies within us all Tarnished by our egos, Taunting evil voices Trusting bad decisions, Toughen, bruised and shattered Transgressions repeated Trapped, a vicious cycle

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Paul Callus

Date: 1/21/2022 2:39:00 PM

You have tackled this form with apparent ease, Paulette, and the content describes the title chosen really well. ~ Best regards // paul

Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 1/22/2022 8:48:00 AM

Paul, actually this was the first time I ever used this form and found it quite a challenge, so your comment really gives me a boast! Cheers, Paulette

Charles Messina

Date: 1/20/2022 5:43:00 PM

If we can't trust ourselves, who can we trust...lol unfortunately, not too many. But trust me, Paula...you wrote this pleiades very well. Kudos! I too, am new to this form, not so easy. Blessings Charlie

Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 1/21/2022 11:56:00 AM

Hi Charlie, You are right~this is not an easy form I worked on this for quite some time, determined to accomplish a concise explanation of the Senyru~ I think I did ok...Blessings, Paulette

Valsa George

Date: 1/19/2022 7:26:00 PM

I come across with a variety of new poetry forms here. I must experiment with Pleiades. I can look up to this poem and make it my model. Thanks a lot Paulette !

Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 1/21/2022 11:58:00 AM

Hi Valsa, the vast amount of poetic forms are our playground to be all stars! I am flattered that you would use my poem as the model! Blessings, Paulette

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 1/19/2022 10:59:00 AM

WE need to realize that our truth is more accurate then someone else's truth of us, or else we will keep mirroring their truth and not ours. Well written , with great thoughts behind it, :)

Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 1/19/2022 12:14:00 PM

Yes, there are times when we second guess our good decisions, and follow the wrong path. It is important to be strong in who we are and what we believe in. Blessings, Paulette

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 1/19/2022 7:10:00 AM

Every line conveys a stark reality, Paulette. Excellent Pleiades! Love ~ Mala

Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 1/19/2022 7:31:00 AM

Mala, Thank you for commenting....the Pleiades form is new to me, so I am very happy I was able to convey a 'truthful' message. Blessings, Paulette

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 1/19/2022 1:14:00 AM

I remember we had many contests for Pleiades by our friend Kim Merryman.

Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 1/19/2022 7:32:00 AM

Pleiades form is new to me, so I thought I would give it a try. A very interesting form to creatively communicate. Blessings, Paulette

Joe Dimino

Date: 1/18/2022 4:01:00 PM

Yep! Been on that ride. Thought it was impossible to get off. We can convince ourselves of anything, the mind listening to the trickster. Better to let Christ handle it for us -- needing only to ask. Blessings my friend.

Joe Dimino
Date: 1/19/2022 2:53:00 PM

I have a philosophy: if I have to go out of my way, to convince myself of something, a long internal debate -- it is generally wrong. Truth needs no affirmation, but its presence. Joe.

Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 1/19/2022 7:34:00 AM

Glad my message was loud and clear~in life we are always being tested~"Truth" should be the only thread we weave throughout our lives. Finding truth is easy, as you said, ask, and Christ will answer. Blessings, Paulette