Trusting Grasshopper

trusting grasshopper chirping with gusto and love expecting to live

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M. L. Kiser

Date: 2/6/2019 5:20:00 PM

There's a rude awakening coming for his little spirit! Well done.

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 2/7/2019 5:31:00 AM

I know, right? To be stepped on or eaten by a lawn mower? What to choose. Oops! Snake got me.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 2/6/2019 9:13:00 AM

Grinning away at this one... Once I saw a praying mantis successfully navigate an eight-lane boulevard in downtown Cincinnati (c. 1973). You would have really enjoyed watching that drama-comedy unfold, I think. :)

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 2/6/2019 10:52:00 AM

I would have loved that actually.

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 2/6/2019 5:42:00 AM

Love should always expect to live, even for a grasshopper its the one thing that makes it chirp, xo

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 2/6/2019 5:49:00 AM

I know. I was picturing one hopping carefree and alive, so deep they do not hear the mower.