Trust Me

Stop listen, can you hear- what is it you need - tell me now, speak aloud- step out from the crowd- ask again, and again- I can heal your pain

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L'Nass Shango

Date: 5/20/2009 7:00:00 AM

Only a poet awashed with humanity can write such words of empathy, bravo

Sharon Winter

Date: 5/15/2009 11:30:00 AM

Thank you Brian - return mail call. xoxo

Charlene Bird

Date: 5/13/2009 8:01:00 PM

SUBERB!! Brian, Has a wonderful message and awesome delivery. This must go to my favs. Thank you for your kind comments, always appreciated.

John Loving Iii

Date: 5/13/2009 2:43:00 PM

oh if they only knew to ask, and ask again untill they get what they want. they will see that god does grant some wishes. john h loving iii

Carrie Richards

Date: 5/13/2009 12:40:00 PM

This is a keeper.....one to tuck away, and re-read from time to time, ...as needed. Lovely sentiment. ~ Love, Carrie

Izzy Gumbo

Date: 5/13/2009 9:34:00 AM

I keep coming back to this one Brian... must mean it's meant for the faves. Hugs and blessings.

Izzy Gumbo

Date: 5/13/2009 7:50:00 AM

wow Brian! Well done my friend and powerful! Brilliant, beauty.

Sharon Winter

Date: 5/13/2009 7:04:00 AM

So inspiring. Your faith is powerful and moving. Love, Shar

Christopher Higgins

Date: 5/13/2009 4:10:00 AM

The title speaks loudly..I am afraid to let go of the wheel of life..I like driving my own car and trusting someone to do that for me and lead me is a nerve wrecking endeavor....this is done well.

Diane Christian

Date: 5/13/2009 1:34:00 AM

Amen Brian, a great poem so ful of truth he can heal us all. God bless you from diane

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/13/2009 1:03:00 AM

Indeed, He can "heal your pain." The message is very clear and the layout quite creative, Brian!