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Doubt inflicts a pain lonely hearts bear, facing truths you wish would disappear. You realize fate isn't always fair, dredging up memories steeped in fear. Rejection hijacks feelings of hope, navigating shallows of darkness. And dreams morph into a safety rope, as fantasies embellish starkness. Paper dreams all too easily tear; caught in life's whirlwind of push and shove. And lies conceal a lustful affair; that no longer is tethered to love. Find your happy place, pat dry your tears; there's no need to cry; dreams can come true. Love's not as veiled as it first appears, trust in yourself; start looking anew.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 5/23/2018 1:22:00 PM
Love your final stanza.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 5/23/2018 5:24:00 PM
Thanks Line, your comments are always most welcome, Emile.
Date: 5/11/2017 9:45:00 AM
You have woven the fragility of human emotions into your work masterfully as always Emile. Human love and feelings are too sensitive to be treated clumsily. You last two verses give the answer like ointment to heal the wound. A Big 7 my friend ... Maria
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Date: 5/11/2017 10:16:00 AM
Maria, it is always a pleasure to read your comments my friend, thank you very much, Emile.
Date: 5/11/2017 3:39:00 AM
Love the wisdom shared in this write of yours Emile. Especially the last stanza. Awesome write
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Emile Pinet
Date: 5/11/2017 9:26:00 AM
Thanks Wilma, your comments are always most welcome, Emile.
Date: 5/9/2017 10:04:00 AM
This is AMAZING! I love it Emile, it touches me at a time when I needed to read something like this. Though not in the ring of love, but more in the ring of friendship.. I've found hardships that this would see me through. It was wrote for you, but somehow I feel I was meant to see it. God bless. 7 only because I can't rate higher.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 5/10/2017 5:44:00 PM
Thank you so much Jesse, for sharing your feelings, I appreciate your comments and support my friend, I hope things work out well for you, Emile.
Date: 5/9/2017 5:24:00 AM
Good Morning Emile. This is so eloquently and beautifully stated and expressed. May we remember your words of inspiration and words of worth. Honestly. This entry is whole and should be considered as whole but if you take each stanza one by one everything has a message. Wonderful work in its entirety. Have a wonderful day.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 5/9/2017 9:36:00 AM
Thanks Lisa, as always, I appreciate your friendly comments and support my friend, Emile.
Date: 5/8/2017 11:18:00 PM
The last verse is filled with wisdom's, many know but have a hard time to follow, as usual you have weaved a fine poem of emotions and beautiful prose!
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Date: 5/9/2017 9:35:00 AM
Thanks Arthur, I appreciate your friendly comments and support my friend, Emile.
Date: 5/8/2017 12:51:00 PM
such a hopeful melody trailing with impressive metaphors and rhyme scheme... much enjoyed, emile..huggs
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Date: 5/8/2017 2:43:00 PM
Thanks Nette, I appreciate your comments and support my friend, Emile.
Date: 5/8/2017 12:49:00 PM
Emile you have once again written a poem that can reach many. Well done. Great ending too :)
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Emile Pinet
Date: 5/8/2017 2:42:00 PM
Thanks Heidi, I appreciate your comments and continued support, Emile.

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