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This poem was written for Dave. A lover who became a good and cherished friend. We kept each other going through dark times. I reached out to him recently just to say Hi and thank you. We had not spoken in years. We are both past the dark times. 

He was happy to hear from me.  Its good to stay in touch. Some people touch you for a lifetime. 

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Some think it's given up front some think it's earned some think it's something innate some think it learned Though trust is not a physical thing it can be broken, shattered, smashed and with each blow the trust left is not like cash Its more like water, it drips and drizzles and oozes all away its meant to be in a calm still pool not agitated in any way Though the pool can settle to a blow the container might gain a crack and its ourselves you see that need the fixing, to hold the trust pool back With trust in yourself, and trust in others, the world is a friendly place With lack of trust into a bleak world we are thrust and our future is in decay So build the bonds of trust with me, and as I will with you to be there for each other, no matter what may come is the best in this world we can do. Trust For Dave – Artimus - Susan Manley

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Date: 9/5/2023 3:11:00 AM
A brilliant poem! Well written.
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Susan Manley
Date: 9/6/2023 6:33:00 AM
Thanks!

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