Truely Fall

It is truly 
	Fall
		when the trees
		with grace
				give way	
				the ripe leaves	
						falling

Is it true fall		have formed		~
	     for formations			~		~
	   ~~~~~of~~~~~
	       ~geese~

and	seed	pods		~

Truly Fall
	with the frost	~	~
		/
	       <>/<>
	       on the
	     Winesap
	       apples	~~
			and the thickening of the cats fur///////

When the trees
	with grace	~~
	    rest  	~~~~~
~~~~~~~~~~~~~blanketing the forest floor.~~~~~~~~~

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 10/10/2009 6:57:00 PM
like the way you did that poem, nice job.
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Date: 10/6/2009 10:42:00 AM
Such beauty in your words and great display! Excellent work, dear talented friend. BIG HUG! Love, Robin
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Date: 10/6/2009 7:37:00 AM
An artist with words.....lovely, Deborah!! ~
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Date: 10/6/2009 4:18:00 AM
For sure Deborah all signs that fall is actually here. Amazing writing. Thank you. Love,Carol
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Date: 10/5/2009 7:59:00 PM
=) Oh wow....lovely falling...fall jojojojo interesting use of symbols!!! Thanks a lot for sharing!!=)
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Date: 10/5/2009 4:22:00 PM
Love th epoem and the form is very creative! ~Trudy~
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Date: 10/5/2009 2:49:00 PM
creative joy!... jim
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Date: 10/5/2009 1:22:00 PM
I think this is a wonderful picture of words, very artful and creative. Regards: Déirdre
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