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Truely Fall

It is truly Fall when the trees with grace give way the ripe leaves falling Is it true fall have formed ~ for formations ~ ~ ~~~~~of~~~~~ ~geese~ and seed pods ~ Truly Fall with the frost ~ ~ / <>/<> on the Winesap apples ~~ and the thickening of the cats fur/////// When the trees with grace ~~ rest ~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~blanketing the forest floor.~~~~~~~~~

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 10/10/2009 6:57:00 PM
like the way you did that poem, nice job.
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Date: 10/6/2009 10:42:00 AM
Such beauty in your words and great display! Excellent work, dear talented friend. BIG HUG! Love, Robin
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Date: 10/6/2009 7:37:00 AM
An artist with words.....lovely, Deborah!! ~
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Date: 10/6/2009 4:18:00 AM
For sure Deborah all signs that fall is actually here. Amazing writing. Thank you. Love,Carol
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Date: 10/5/2009 7:59:00 PM
=) Oh wow....lovely falling...fall jojojojo interesting use of symbols!!! Thanks a lot for sharing!!=)
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Date: 10/5/2009 4:22:00 PM
Love th epoem and the form is very creative! ~Trudy~
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Date: 10/5/2009 2:49:00 PM
creative joy!... jim
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Date: 10/5/2009 1:22:00 PM
I think this is a wonderful picture of words, very artful and creative. Regards: Déirdre
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