Debbie Guzzi Poet Free verse

Truely Fall

It is truly 
	Fall
		when the trees
		with grace
				give way	
				the ripe leaves	
						falling

Is it true fall		have formed		~
	     for formations			~		~
	   ~~~~~of~~~~~
	       ~geese~

and	seed	pods		~

Truly Fall
	with the frost	~	~
		/
	       <>/<>
	       on the
	     Winesap
	       apples	~~
			and the thickening of the cats fur///////

When the trees
	with grace	~~
	    rest  	~~~~~
~~~~~~~~~~~~~blanketing the forest floor.~~~~~~~~~

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Doris Culverhouse October 10, 2009 at 6:57 PM like the way you did that poem, nice job.

Robin L. Gass October 6, 2009 at 10:42 AM Such beauty in your words and great display! Excellent work, dear talented friend. BIG HUG! Love, Robin

Carrie Richards October 6, 2009 at 7:37 AM An artist with words.....lovely, Deborah!! ~

Carol Sunshine Brown October 6, 2009 at 4:18 AM For sure Deborah all signs that fall is actually here. Amazing writing. Thank you. Love,Carol

Cesar Cantu October 5, 2009 at 7:59 PM =) Oh wow....lovely falling...fall jojojojo interesting use of symbols!!! Thanks a lot for sharing!!=)

Trudy Diane Rider October 5, 2009 at 4:22 PM Love th epoem and the form is very creative! ~Trudy~

James Marshall Goff October 5, 2009 at 2:49 PM creative joy!... jim

Deirdre Omaidin October 5, 2009 at 1:22 PM I think this is a wonderful picture of words, very artful and creative. Regards: Déirdre