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True Tales of An Acorn

I felt his little wrinkled nose pressing through the snow, just when I thought I was all alone, under this lovely quilt so bright. I’m tougher than I look; I can be broken. Let the cold freeze his selfish schnoz! The psychiatrist did say I have an anger problem, he called me a nut - I told him to leap from this tree and to my amazement he did. His swan dive was amazing, swirling and twirling, but darn, he landed on those lazy leaves. I prefer to think of myself in poetic words, I am the fruit of the oak. I’m leather-tough and my body’s shaped like a cup. I’m practically perfect. The bully-birds picked on my brothers and sisters. They came close to me a couple of times, but the kindly wind swept them away, their tail feathers ruffled. In the Autumn I fell, landed hard - my bum bruised and an impish human threw me into a basket. I was humiliated as I dashed against John Does. He took us up, lined us up like army men - should I salute, I wondered. His mother called him in; the wind came with a cold shoulder this time, brushed me off. Then this bitter storm of white flakes frightened me. I fought the shiver - over time I became warm under confectionary powder. My future grim - I see now I shan’t become a tree. I reside inside another living thing - adieu adieu. I close my eyes as I am chewed. I leave this note beside my cocoon. Remember me, mon amie as you look up. 4/29/2020 The Last Acorn Poetry Contest Sponsor: John Lawless

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Date: 5/4/2020 6:29:00 AM
This is remarkably astute and wonderful!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/4/2020 7:42:00 AM
Thank you, Caren!
Date: 5/1/2020 12:26:00 AM
Oh wow, read a few poems for this contest, Kim, this is right up there with very best..Stay Safe. Harry
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/1/2020 10:44:00 PM
Thank you, Harry!
Date: 4/30/2020 11:23:00 AM
Brilliant personification, especially that last stanza.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/30/2020 12:48:00 PM
Thank you, Silent!
Date: 4/30/2020 3:18:00 AM
Brilliant personification, Kim:) loved the tale, gripping till the very end:)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/30/2020 9:18:00 AM
Thank you, Jo! :)
Date: 4/29/2020 10:18:00 PM
Sad and hopeful all at the same time, Kim. A story well told. Good luck in the cotest.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/29/2020 10:24:00 PM
Thank you, Sam!
Date: 4/29/2020 7:35:00 PM
Kim, I was captivated by the escapades of your little acorn, who lives on in another way, for another day. The artistry of your pen never fails you, my friend. Best wishes for a win.. ~Susan
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/29/2020 10:23:00 PM
Thanks for your kindness! :)
Date: 4/29/2020 4:09:00 PM
What a brave, endearing saga - those last lines so impactful! Love this for the contest, Kim!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/29/2020 4:12:00 PM
Thank you, Michelle! <3

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