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True Love Waits

His lonely desert offered no oasis Until he glimpsed a stream within her eyes This palm tree of potential love he chases But kisses set aflame his longed-for prize The stream he’d found brought him no lasting bliss It was but a mirage of tears returned His thirst for true love unquenched by her kiss; Though seeds of love were sown, their palm tree burned Though sorrowful, he blames himself alone For loving her to quench his parched desire Retreating to the desert on his own Avoiding love averts another fire He feels she loved his kiss more than his heart In ashes, he awaits a brand new start ........ In younger days he’d found no spring nor well His love-quenched thirst distorted all he knew Until this songbird settled for a spell They sang each other strains of “I love you” The scar of First Love’s fire slowly heals Their passion’s ashes long misunderstood In time though, it is gratitude he feels Towards the one who brought his life such joy Though blinded by her passionate affection His blindness he could scarcely blame on her He learns to break down walls of his protection With softened heart finds healing can occur His songbird thus returns; songs fill the air, Those ashes fertilized the tree they share

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Date: 3/8/2020 1:37:00 PM
hmmm, because they go together, I am not sure you could use just one as the "main piece" (I aim to find your BEST sonnets for you to submit!) however, as I study them, I think it's the first one that would do the best on its own. I love your use of metaphor so much, John, and you always do so well with sonnet meter.
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John Watt
Date: 8/12/2020 8:59:00 AM
Thank you for your kind and careful review of my sonnets, Andrea.
Date: 7/28/2019 1:04:00 PM
True love waits, and waits, and waits... Often too long or not at all. It is not a given that we all find it or get to keep it once we do. It’s a nebulous state of being. I like the first Sonnet in describing the pain and the torture of the wait. Good job.
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John Watt
Date: 7/28/2019 6:55:00 PM
Edlynn, thank you for the read and the kind words. I'm glad you could resonate with it. I wrote these sonnets 35 years apart, with a little bit of perspective added the 2nd time around. You're right; love is a fragile thing and shouldn't ever be taken for granted. Hugs, John
Date: 10/25/2016 3:53:00 AM
I so love all the hints at springs, wells, oases, fertility and so on. Good luck in the contest
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Date: 10/16/2016 7:16:00 AM
This should do well.
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Date: 10/3/2016 2:21:00 PM
What a lovely write, John. This is a winner to me. Best of luck in the contest, I enjoyed the read~ Caryl
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John Watt
Date: 10/3/2016 6:30:00 PM
Thank you for your kind words, Caryl. Good luck to you as well!
Date: 10/2/2016 4:50:00 PM
Lovely writing . Good luck in the contest. Thank you for your comments. Love, Joyce
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John Watt
Date: 10/3/2016 6:30:00 PM
Thank you Joyce, always appreciate your kind comments ~ John

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