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Contest- Breathless

Sponsor- Constance La France

The evening's trappings were misty twilight my love enters like a painting come to life a vision I dreamed in a sunset's gaze of wishes when I looked to the sky and wondered if God could create a woman of breathless beauty Whose dark eyes of brown were liquid and mysterious with a wellspring of passion tender and abiding with kindness illuminating her beauty even more She embraced my soul with her beguiling essence and warmed the realm of my heart's paradise offering an elixir of passion that kept my soul from earthly needs where I was tethered to her love of unimaginable beauty as we bathed in the glow from our hearts and found a glimpse of heaven that held us breathless

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Date: 5/27/2025 4:49:00 AM
- Back with a congrats ...enjoy your top winning spot, Frederic :) - hugs
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Date: 5/25/2025 7:24:00 AM
- A beauty with glimpses of both heaven and love... beautifully written, Frederic :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
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Frederic Parker
Date: 5/25/2025 3:35:00 PM
Thank you Anne for your kind remark, best wishes to you and yours...Frederic
Date: 5/25/2025 7:23:00 AM
A breathtaking poem as always dear Frederick, you do that just effortlessly, in every poem you write especially on romance i see such beauty that emanates so much warmth and so much more and your subtle wordplay is brilliant here, and gives an evocative touch especially in lines "an elixir of passion" and "wellspring of passion" as well as "and found a glimpse of heaven that held us breathless" how soulful! Best wishes! Pleasure reading! Sending you light always
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Frederic Parker
Date: 5/25/2025 3:37:00 PM
Ink I'm always happy when you find particular lines in my poetry that stay with you." light to you also "...Frederic
Date: 5/25/2025 6:57:00 AM
Frederic, such a love as you so amorously have written... one that leaves us breathless needs nothing more than to be treasured and returned.
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Frederic Parker
Date: 5/25/2025 3:39:00 PM
Thank you Lin, after reading your poetry I know you have a fondness for love poems...Frederic

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